香水— Part 1 评分报告

× I love since I like to use perfume on a daily basis.

✓ I love it since I like to use perfume on a daily basis.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'love'. In English, the verb 'love' requires an object when expressing affection for something. Adding 'it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Usually I prefer to put on flour or fragrance rather than stronger or heaviest scents.

✓ Usually I prefer to put on floral or fragrance scents rather than stronger or heavier scents.

The word 'flour' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'floral', which relates to flowers and scents. Also, 'heaviest' should be 'heavier' to correctly compare scents. Correcting these words improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Absolutely yes, I found using those perfumes smell like flowers and stay a long time also, and I sometimes prefer to wear light perfume such as Actions or Crystal Sense because I like uh, scents umm, myself very well.

✓ Absolutely yes, I find that using those perfumes makes me smell like flowers and they last a long time. Also, I sometimes prefer to wear light perfumes such as Actions or Crystal Sense because I like those scents very much.

The original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect verb tense ('found' should be 'find'), incorrect verb agreement ('perfumes smell' should be 'makes me smell'), and awkward phrasing. Breaking the sentence into two and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, once I gifted a flowers perfume to my best friends on her 17th birthday.

✓ Yes, once I gifted a floral perfume to my best friend on her 17th birthday.

The phrase 'flowers perfume' is incorrect; 'floral perfume' is the correct term. Also, 'best friends' should be singular 'best friend' to match 'her'. These corrections fix noun usage and agreement.

× Her performance was very old and and the end when I gift perfumes she was delighted with my son's gift.

✓ Her perfume was very old, and in the end, when I gifted perfumes, she was delighted with my gift.

The sentence has several errors: 'performance' should be 'perfume', repeated 'and', incorrect phrase 'the end when' should be 'in the end, when', and 'gift' should be past tense 'gifted'. Also, 'my son's gift' is unclear; assuming the speaker means their own gift. These corrections improve clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I think spar from a very expensive because, uh performs, umm was uh, quite and uh good sense umm because of it's expensive.

✓ Yes, I think perfume is very expensive because it has a good scent and is costly.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'spar' and 'performs'. Pronouns like 'it's' are misused. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence, using correct pronouns and vocabulary.