镜子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语句不够流畅，存在重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免填充词，使用完整句子，并且直接回答问题。

示例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror every day because I need to dress up and apply makeup carefully.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，增加细节说明购买镜子的原因。

示例: Yes, I have bought mirrors because they are essential for me to dress up and apply makeup properly every day.

建议: 回答中有过多的填充词，语法错误较多。建议简洁表达，使用连贯的句子，并说明携带镜子的具体原因。

示例: Yes, I usually carry a small portable mirror when I go out because I want to check my appearance and look presentable.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误多，且逻辑不够连贯。建议简化句子，清楚表达观点，并用连词连接理由。

示例: No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room because I believe in ghost stories related to mirrors, so I prefer not to have them as decorations.

× I also need to looking at myself in the mirror.

✓ I also need to look at myself in the mirror.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式。这里的need to后面应接look，而不是looking。

× it's really vital items in my daily life

✓ it's a really vital item in my daily life

items是复数，而前面用的是单数it，主谓不一致。应使用单数item与it保持一致。

× I bought mirror myself

✓ I bought a mirror myself

mirror是可数名词，单数形式前应加冠词a。

× it's such such an important things for me.

✓ it's such an important thing for me.

things是复数，前面用的是单数an important，主谓不一致，应使用单数thing。

× I don't treat mirror like a decorations in my room

✓ I don't treat mirror like a decoration in my room

decoration是不可数名词或单数形式，前面加了冠词a，不能用复数decorations。

× I don't treat mirror like a decorations in my room

✓ I don't treat mirrors like decorations in my room

mirror前缺少复数形式，既然后面用复数decorations，mirror也应为复数mirrors。