梦想— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱，建议简洁明了地表达梦想，并避免重复和无关内容。

示例: Yes, I often dream about becoming a mathematician in the future because I enjoy solving problems and have studied math extensively in high school.

建议: 表达不连贯且有重复，建议用简洁的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I usually keep my dreams private because I believe success will prove my abilities. Also, I'm not very interested in other people's dreams.

建议: 回答内容不明确且语法错误较多，建议明确表达对梦境意义的看法，并使用具体词汇。

示例: I believe dreams can inspire us and give energy to face life challenges, although they may not have a special meaning.

建议: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议用简单句表达观点，并说明原因。

示例: I used to strongly want to achieve my dreams, but now I think it depends on the opportunities and choices I make in the future, so dreams are not always easy to realize.

× Dreams dreams of me, which is becoming a mathematician in the future because I'm really outsized ways a business and I always go to high school in this major but.

✓ Dreams of me, which are becoming a mathematician in the future because I'm really interested in business and I always go to high school in this major.

句子中“Dreams dreams”重复且不正确，应该是“Dreams”。“which is becoming”中的“which”指代复数“Dreams”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。此外，“outsized ways a business”表达不清，推测为“interested in business”。

× Dreams dreams of me, which is becoming a mathematician in the future because I'm really outsized ways a business and I always go to high school in this major but.

✓ Dreams of me, which are becoming a mathematician in the future because I'm really interested in business and I always go to high school in this major.

句中“which”指代不明确，且“I'm really outsized ways a business”中“outsized ways a business”不符合英语表达习惯，应改为“interested in business”。

× I don't share my dreams with others because I think it's a really privacy privacy seems and I will I will prove aids through the success succeed of of me and I'm not interested in other streams because I think I really depends.

✓ I don't share my dreams with others because I think it's really private, and I will prove it through my success. I'm not interested in other dreams because I think it really depends.

“privacy privacy seems”重复且用词错误，应为“private”。“prove aids through the success succeed of of me”表达混乱，应改为“prove it through my success”。“other streams”应为“other dreams”。

× Choir singing this anything special meanings about dreams. I think it's just a clerical and the structure for our life and give us give us a lot of energy and to make sure that we have we have a federation.

✓ I don't think there is any special meaning about dreams. I think it's just a reflection and structure for our life and gives us a lot of energy to make sure that we have motivation.

句子“Choir singing this anything special meanings about dreams”不通顺，应改为“I don't think there is any special meaning about dreams”。“clerical”用词错误，应为“reflection”。“give us give us”重复，应改为“gives us”。“federation”用词错误，应为“motivation”。

× In the past I must be sad, I want to my dreams come true.

✓ In the past, I was sad because I wanted my dreams to come true.

“must be sad”时态错误，过去时应为“was sad”。“I want to my dreams come true”结构错误，应为“I wanted my dreams to come true”。

× But now I think it's very depends on what the opportunities you were mad in the future and the major wants decide your career in the future.

✓ But now I think it very much depends on what opportunities you have in the future and the major you choose will decide your career.

“it's very depends”结构错误，应为“it very much depends”。“you were mad”应为“you have”。“the major wants decide”应为“the major you choose will decide”。

× So I think dream is not simple.

✓ So I think dreams are not simple.

“dream”应为复数“dreams”，谓语动词也应改为复数“are”。