梦想— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar linking words use kora hoy nai. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Example hisebe, apni dream er description e aro specific hote paren, ar linking words diye sentence gulo jorate paren.

示例: Yes, I remember the dream I had last night. In the dream, I saw ants crawling on my body, which made me feel very scared. After waking up, my wife gave me some water to drink before sleeping again so that I wouldn't have such dreams.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence clear na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple ar clear korte, ar linking words use kore answer ke bhalo kore organize korte. Apni aro specific hote paren, jemon keno apni Alim er sathe dreams share koren, ar keno wife er dream shunte bhalo lage.

示例: Yes, I usually share my dreams with a friend named Alim because he understands me well. Also, I am very interested in listening to others' dreams, especially my wife's, because I find them fascinating and sometimes meaningful.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache ar kichu grammar error ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe structure korte, ar linking words use kore answer ke logical banate. Apni aro specific hote paren, jemon keno apni mone koren dreams er special meaning ache, ar kon dhoroner incidents er sathe relate korte paren.

示例: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they often relate to real-life events or feelings. For example, if I dream about an exam, it might reflect my anxiety about upcoming tests.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache, ar kichu word misuse hoyeche (e.g., 'bedroom' instead of 'bad dreams'). Apni chesta korun clear ar shothik vocabulary use korte. Apni sentence gulo ke shothik vabe organize korun, ar linking words use korun. Apni aro specific hote paren, jemon kon dhoroner bhalo dream apni puro korte chan.

示例: I want to make all my good dreams come true because they represent my hopes and goals. However, I do not want bad dreams to happen in my life, as they usually symbolize problems or fears.

× I saw some ants where in my body and I was very afraid after remembering and watching the dream.

✓ I saw some ants were in my body and I was very afraid after remembering and watching the dream.

The word 'where' is incorrectly used instead of 'were'. 'Were' is the past tense of 'be' used for plural subjects like 'ants'. This is a singular/plural verb form issue.

× So my wife gave me some water to drink it before sleeping so that I don't see this kind of.

✓ So my wife gave me some water to drink before sleeping so that I don't see this kind of dream.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, the phrase 'this kind of' is incomplete and needs a noun like 'dream' to be correct.

× Yes, I share my dreams with one known person who is called Alim and also I am interested in listening to the dreams of others especially when my wife see any dream.

✓ Yes, I share my dreams with one known person who is called Alim and also I am interested in listening to the dreams of others especially when my wife sees any dream.

The verb 'see' should be 'sees' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my wife'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I love listening hard dream.

✓ I love listening to hard dreams.

The phrase 'listening hard dream' is incorrect. The verb 'listening' should be followed by 'to' and the noun should be plural 'dreams' to make sense.

× Ah yes, obviously I, I, I think dreams have special meanings because it if we related with our real life, it becomes familiar with the incidents which happens in our life.

✓ Ah yes, obviously I think dreams have special meanings because if we relate them to our real life, they become familiar with the incidents which happen in our life.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and tense errors. 'It if' is incorrect; 'if we relate them' is correct. Also, 'happens' should be 'happen' to agree with plural 'incidents'.

× But the bedroom, I don't want to make them come through.

✓ But the bad dreams, I don't want to make them come true.

'Bedroom' is incorrect here; it should be 'bad dreams'. Also, 'come through' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'come true'.