梦想— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevaplarınızda tekrar eden ifadelerden kaçının ve cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanın. Ayrıca, cümle yapılarınızı ve dilbilgisini geliştirmeye odaklanmalısınız.

示例: Yes, I remember a dream I had when I was 8 years old. I wanted to become a translator because I love languages. Moreover, translators can help people understand each other better, which I find very rewarding.

建议: Cevabınızda konuyu net bir şekilde belirtin ve nedenlerinizi açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi hatalarını azaltmak için pratik yapmalısınız.

示例: I usually don't share my dreams with others because I find it difficult to explain them clearly. Also, sometimes discussing dreams can be confusing for both people.

建议: Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmek için düşüncelerinizi daha iyi organize edin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak ifadelerinizi destekleyin. Ayrıca, kelime seçimlerinizi geliştirin.

示例: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they can help us understand our life's purpose. Sometimes, dreams reflect our feelings and desires, which makes them important.

建议: Cevabınızı daha net ve tutarlı yapmak için cümlelerinizi düzgün kurun ve düşüncelerinizi açıkça ifade edin. Ayrıca, daha uygun kelimeler kullanmaya çalışın.

示例: Yes, I have many dreams and ambitions in my life. I am willing to work hard and study a lot to achieve them.

× I love being translator if I be honest.

✓ I love being a translator if I am honest.

The noun 'translator' is countable and singular, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, the verb 'be' should be in the present tense 'am' to agree with the subject 'I'.

× And secondly, I can surely say that I love being translator.

✓ And secondly, I can surely say that I love being a translator.

Same as above, 'translator' is a singular countable noun and needs the article 'a' before it.

× And thirdly, you making a lot of money and you helping each other understand themselves.

✓ And thirdly, you make a lot of money and help each other understand yourselves.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'are' for the present continuous tense, or it should be in simple present tense. Also, 'themselves' is incorrect as the pronoun should refer to 'you' (plural), so 'yourselves' is correct.

× I don't participate with someone because conjugations are very can be awful for me.

✓ I don't participate with someone because conjugations can be very awful for me.

The phrase 'are very can be' is incorrect; 'can be' alone suffices. Also, 'participate with someone' is awkward; better to say 'participate with others' or 'participate in conversations with someone' but since only grammar issues are corrected, the main issue is the verb phrase.

× That's because and secondly, it can be very rough time for both of the both of us and that's why I don't want to participate.

✓ That's because, secondly, it can be a very rough time for both of us, and that's why I don't want to participate.

The phrase 'both of the both of us' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'rough time' needs the article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and removing redundancy.

× Yes, I think because we finding our life meaning in our dreams.

✓ Yes, I think because we find our life meaning in our dreams.

The verb 'finding' is a present participle and incorrect here; the simple present 'find' is needed to match the tense and sentence structure.

× And secondly you can surely say that dreams are the most important in our life because we can sometimes remote.

✓ And secondly, you can surely say that dreams are the most important in our life because we can sometimes remember them.

The word 'remote' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'remember'. Also, a comma after 'secondly' improves sentence clarity.

× If you cannot, do we have remorse in it?

✓ If you cannot, do we have remorse about it?

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'about' is the correct preposition to use with 'remorse'.

× Yes, I want a lot in my life if you want to.

✓ Yes, I want a lot in my life, if you want to.

This sentence is somewhat unclear, but grammatically, a comma is needed before 'if you want to' to separate clauses. No plural or singular issue here, but punctuation improves clarity.

× We have neat ambition in our life and study a lot for it.

✓ We have a neat ambition in our life and study a lot for it.

The noun 'ambition' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'a' before it.