电子邮件— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I don't often send emails because I usually use social media apps like WeChat or Facebook to communicate. I only send emails when I need to contact my teacher or for work purposes.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

示例: I usually send emails when I apply for jobs or need to contact my teachers. For example, I might send pictures of my homework or assessments via email.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: In China, sending emails is not very popular because most people prefer using social media apps to communicate. These apps are faster and more convenient.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng bị ảnh hưởng bởi lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because technology is developing. People usually use social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, or WeChat to communicate since messaging is faster and more convenient.

× I know I don't often send emails because I right now I usually used social media act like a yellow or Facebook too.

✓ I know I don't often send emails because right now I usually use social media apps like WeChat or Facebook too.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present and past tense verbs ('used' instead of 'use') and has awkward word order. The verb should be in the present tense 'use' to match 'right now' and 'usually'. Also, 'act like a yellow' is unclear and likely a mishearing of 'apps like WeChat'. The sentence is corrected to use present tense verbs and clearer wording.

× I send message instead of his mail are just sent his mail when I fly work or for my teacher.

✓ I send messages instead of emails; I only send emails when I do work or for my teacher.

The sentence has singular/plural confusion ('message' should be 'messages', 'mail' should be 'emails'). Also, 'are just sent his mail' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses plural forms and clarifies the meaning. 'Fly work' is likely a mishearing of 'do work'.

× I just send emails to your orders.

✓ I just send emails to others.

The phrase 'your orders' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'others'. The pronoun 'your' is wrongly used here. The correction replaces it with the correct pronoun 'others'.

× I went I when I apply for work or I need to contact.

✓ I send emails when I apply for work or when I need to contact someone.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'went' (past tense) and has incomplete structure. The verb should be in present tense 'send' to match the habitual action. The sentence is corrected for tense and completeness.

× With my pictures from my 4 feet from my homework or assessments.

✓ I send my pictures of my homework or assessments.

The phrase 'with my pictures from my 4 feet from my homework' is unclear and incorrect. Likely intended to say 'pictures of my homework'. The preposition 'of' is correct here to indicate the content of the pictures.

× Uh, I don't know because I live in China so in my country said he is mailing a.

✓ Uh, I don't know because I live in China, so in my country, sending emails is not popular.

The phrase 'said he is mailing a' is incorrect and unclear. It likely means 'sending emails is not popular'. The pronoun 'he' is wrongly used. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× because people usually do so. So media last form to communicate with others because it's very fast and convenient.

✓ because people usually use social media as the main form to communicate with others because it's very fast and convenient.

The phrase 'do so. So media last form' is incorrect. It should be 'use social media as the main form'. The preposition 'as' is needed to indicate the role of social media.

× Oh I think send me emails will be less popular in the future because technology is development so people usually use social media flash from stretches, Facebook, Instagram or yellow to communicate with.

✓ Oh, I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because technology is developing, so people usually use social media platforms like WeChat, Facebook, Instagram, or others to communicate.

The sentence has tense errors ('send me emails' should be 'sending emails'), incorrect word forms ('technology is development' should be 'technology is developing'), and unclear words ('flash from stretches' likely 'platforms'). The correction fixes verb forms, tense, and clarifies vocabulary.

× and send message is very fast and convenient to use.

✓ and sending messages is very fast and convenient to use.

The phrase 'send message' should be 'sending messages' to function as a noun phrase. Also, plural 'messages' is appropriate. The gerund form 'sending' is needed here.