电子邮件— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在重复表达，句子结构不够清晰，且部分表达不自然。建议避免重复，使用更简洁流畅的句子，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

示例: I rarely send emails because I prefer using apps like WeChat or Instagram to communicate with friends and teachers, as they allow instant replies.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，存在语法错误和表达混乱，影响理解。建议明确表达发送邮件的具体场合，避免无关或错误的信息。

示例: I usually send emails for official purposes, such as submitting assignments or communicating about competitions organized by companies.

建议: 回答中断句不连贯，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，逻辑清晰地说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: In my experience, sending emails is not very popular in China because people prefer using WeChat, which allows instant replies and is more convenient.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯，影响理解。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: In my opinion, sending emails will become less popular in the future because with technological development, people prefer more convenient ways like messaging or phone calls to communicate.

× I rarely send emails since I was a student so it's more often to use we chat or IG.

✓ I have rarely sent emails since I was a student, so I more often use WeChat or IG.

句中描述从过去到现在的持续动作，应该用现在完成时而不是一般现在时。

× it's more often to use we chat or IG.

✓ I more often use WeChat or IG.

“more often to use”结构不正确，应该直接用副词修饰动词，去掉“to”。

× To communicate with our friends and teachers since we can answer it immediately, but sending emails I think is not too much.

✓ I use them to communicate with my friends and teachers since we can reply immediately, but I think sending emails is not very common.

代词使用不当，“it”指代不明确，应使用“them”指代前文提到的工具。

× Convenient for us since it needs time to watch.

✓ It is not convenient for us since it takes time to check.

“Convenient”作为形容词，句中缺少主语和谓语，且“needs time to watch”表达不准确，应改为“takes time to check”。

× If it's necessary for us to send emails, I think is for some official emails and for some lessons or some competition that the company may need to have to eat mouse and sent some notes for tourists.

✓ If it's necessary for us to send emails, I think it is for some official matters, lessons, or competitions where the company may need to send some notices to customers.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语，且“eat mouse”明显错误，应改为“send notices to customers”。

× sending emails I think is not popular in China because it's more convenient to. Send thing, we chat.

✓ I think sending emails is not popular in China because it's more convenient to send things via WeChat.

介词使用错误，“send thing, we chat”应改为“send things via WeChat”。

× In my own opinions. Sending emails will be Leslie popular in the future because by the development of the technology.

✓ In my opinion, sending emails will be less popular in the future because of the development of technology.

句子断裂且拼写错误，“Leslie”应为“less”，且“by the development”应改为“because of the development”。

× What people would choose the convenient wait? For example just sending message to others or have a phone call so that is easy to connect with others?

✓ People would choose the convenient way, for example, just sending messages to others or having a phone call so that it is easy to connect with others.

代词使用错误，“What”不合适，且“wait”应为“way”，句子结构不完整。