电子邮件— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly with a topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: I don't send many emails nowadays. However, when I was at university, I received and replied to many emails regularly because I had to submit articles and communicate with my professors. Therefore, I used email quite frequently during that time.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains errors that affect understanding. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain the situation. Also, be careful with word choice and grammar to make your answer natural and effective.

示例: The last time I sent an email was about a year ago when I needed to submit an article to my supervisor. I sent it to get their feedback and approval. Since then, I haven't had much reason to send emails.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and contains unclear phrases. Try to organise your ideas logically using linking words and provide specific examples. Also, avoid vague expressions and improve sentence structure for clarity.

示例: In China, sending emails is not very popular for everyday communication. Most people prefer to call or text each other using apps like WeChat or WhatsApp, especially for informal occasions. Therefore, instant messaging apps are more commonly used than email.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by adding more specific reasons and using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid starting with uncertain phrases and try to express your opinion confidently.

示例: I believe that sending emails will become less popular in the future because most people prefer using social media platforms like WhatsApp and Telegram. These apps are more convenient and allow instant communication, which suits modern lifestyles better than email.

× Nowadays I don't send lots of emails, but when I attend in university I received lots of emails and I had to reply them and I sometimes submitted lots of articles.

✓ Nowadays I don't send lots of emails, but when I attended university I received lots of emails and I had to reply to them and I sometimes submitted lots of articles.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Attend' should be in past tense 'attended' to match the past context. Also, 'reply them' is incorrect; the verb 'reply' requires the preposition 'to', so it should be 'reply to them'.

× I had to reply them

✓ I had to reply to them

The verb 'reply' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Omitting 'to' is a common error. The correct form is 'reply to them'. This is a prepositional usage error.

× when I attend in university

✓ when I attended university

The verb 'attend' does not require the preposition 'in' when referring to attending an institution. The correct phrase is 'attend university'. Also, the tense should be past 'attended' to match the context.

× I had to send this article for my supervisor to attitudes.

✓ I had to send this article to my supervisor for review.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'to' when sending something to someone. Also, 'to attitudes' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be replaced with a clearer phrase such as 'for review' or 'for feedback'.

× If I'm not mistaken, it was one years ago when I wanted to submit a specific article.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, it was one year ago when I wanted to submit a specific article.

The phrase 'one years ago' is incorrect because 'one' is singular and should be followed by the singular noun 'year'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Most people prefer to call with each other and text and they like to use lots of application like WhatsApp, Telegram and Instagram to communicate with each other and informal occasion.

✓ Most people prefer to call each other and text, and they like to use lots of applications like WhatsApp, Telegram and Instagram to communicate with each other on informal occasions.

The word 'application' should be plural 'applications' because it refers to multiple apps. Also, 'call with each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'call each other'. The phrase 'and informal occasion' should be 'on informal occasions' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× Most people prefer to call with each other and text and they like to use lots of application like WhatsApp, Telegram and Instagram to communicate with each other and informal occasion.

✓ Most people prefer to call each other and text, and they like to use lots of applications like WhatsApp, Telegram and Instagram to communicate with each other on informal occasions.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'call'; the correct phrase is 'call each other'. Also, 'and informal occasion' lacks a preposition and should be 'on informal occasions'.

× Most people prefer to use a specific things a specific data software.

✓ Most people prefer to use specific things and specific data software.

The phrase 'a specific things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, the sentence lacks conjunctions and clarity; adding 'and' improves the sentence structure.

× Honestly speaking is not really popular in my country.

✓ Honestly speaking, it is not really popular in my country.

The sentence lacks the subject pronoun 'it' before 'is'. Every sentence needs a subject; omitting 'it' causes a sentence without a verb or subject, which is grammatically incorrect.

× Most people prefer to use social media like WhatsApp, Telegram compared to sending e-mail because it's so popular and well known around the world.

✓ Most people prefer to use social media like WhatsApp and Telegram compared to sending e-mail because they are so popular and well known around the world.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'and' between 'WhatsApp' and 'Telegram'. Also, 'it's' refers to singular but the subject is plural 'WhatsApp and Telegram', so 'they are' is correct. This is a pronoun agreement and conjunction usage issue.