电子邮件— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答总体明确，但存在语法和表达不够自然的问题。注意：1) 避免冗余（例如“study related matters”可简化为“for my studies”）；2) 修正语法与搭配错误（如“which helps us keep communicate and better”应为“which helps us communicate better”）；3) 控制在最多5句内并使用连接词使表达更连贯（例如“so”或“which”）。具体练习：把句子拆成主题句+1-2个支持句，注意主谓一致与动词形式。

示例: Yes, I send emails quite often for my studies. For example, I regularly email classmates about our project and share materials, which helps us communicate better.

建议: 回答有思路但表达混乱且有未完成的句子。注意：1) 避免模糊词组（如“work studying hours”应改为“working or studying hours”）；2) 修正不完整句（最后一句没有完成）；3) 使用连接词使时间顺序清晰（例如“in the morning”与“in the late afternoon”之间可用“and”连接）。练习建议：写出完整的两到三句回答，确保每句完整并检查结尾。

示例: I usually send emails during working or studying hours. In the morning I plan my tasks for the day, and in the late afternoon I send summaries of our progress to classmates.

建议: 内容回答方向正确但词汇与语法错误较多。注意：1) 单词错误（“spending emails”应为“sending emails”）；2) 语法和搭配问题（如“there are an increasing number of individuals prefer”应为“an increasing number of people prefer”或“more people prefer”）；3) 用更自然的词汇（用“WeChat or other apps”而非“items”）。练习：改写句子时逐句检查主谓一致和名词选择。

示例: No, sending emails is less popular in China now. Because social media has developed rapidly, more people prefer using apps like WeChat to communicate with colleagues.

建议: 回答观点明确但句子冗长且语法不准确。注意：1) 精简表达，避免重复（如“from my perspective, I think”二选一）；2) 修正语法（“as the technology development rapidly”应为“as technology develops rapidly”）；3) 用连接词使因果关系更自然（例如“because”或“as a result”）。练习：将长句拆成两句，一句表观点，一句给出原因并用具体例子支持。

示例: I think emails will become less popular in the future. As technology develops and more social media platforms emerge, people will increasingly use those apps for everyday communication.

× I send emails quite often, especially for my study related matters.

✓ I send emails quite often, especially for my study-related matters.

“study related”作为复合形容词修饰名词时应使用连字符“study-related”以形成一个整体形容词，避免歧义。建议在类似复合形容词前加连字符或将其改为介词短语（如“matters related to my study”）。

× to share some materials which helps us keep communicate and better.

✓ to share some materials which help us keep communicating and doing better.

从句中主语是复数名词“materials”，谓语动词应为复数形式“help”。另外，“keep communicate”用法错误，动词keep后接动名词，且语义上通常用“keep communicating”或“communicate better”。建议使用“keep communicating”或改为“and communicate better”。

× For me, I usually send emails during work studying hours, especially in the morning when I plan my tasks for the day or in the late afternoon to summarize some progress.

✓ For me, I usually send emails during work or study hours, especially in the morning when I plan my tasks for the day or in the late afternoon to summarize progress.

原句中“work studying hours”结构混乱，应该分为“work or study hours”或用“work/study hours”。此外“summarize some progress”搭配不自然，通常说“summarize progress”或“summarize some of the progress”。建议理顺名词搭配并保持时态为一般现在时。

× For example, I e-mail my classmates about the tasks plans in the.

✓ For example, I e-mail my classmates about the task plans.

原句末尾出现多余的介词“in the”，导致句子结构不完整且位置多余。将句尾多余部分删除，且“tasks plans”应为“task plans”或“tasks’ plans”。建议检查句子结尾是否有残留片段并保持名词短语的一致性。

× No, spending emails are not popular in China nowadays.

✓ No, sending emails is not popular in China nowadays.

“spending emails”是拼写/用词错误，应为“sending emails”。此外“emails”作概念性活动时更常用不可数结构“sending emails is”，因此把动名词短语视为单一活动，谓语用单数。建议注意动词拼写并判断动名词短语作为主语时动词单复数。

× Since the social media has developed rapidly, there are an increasing number of individuals prefer to use them like WeChat or other items to communicate with their colleagues.

✓ Since social media have developed rapidly, an increasing number of people prefer to use platforms like WeChat or other apps to communicate with their colleagues.

“the social media”不自然，通常不加冠词且“media”为复数，谓语应为“have developed”。“there are an increasing number of individuals prefer”结构错误，应使用“an increasing number of people prefer”。“them like WeChat or other items”中代词和名词用法不当，应用“platforms like WeChat or other apps”。建议注意可数/复数形式、主谓一致和恰当词汇搭配（platforms/apps）。

× From my perspective, I think sending emails will become less popular in the future as the technology development rapidly, more and more social media has appeared and people try to follow the trend and use them to communicate and talk.

✓ From my perspective, I think sending emails will become less popular in the future as technology develops rapidly, more and more social media have appeared, and people try to follow the trend and use them to communicate.

句中时态与主谓一致有问题。“the technology development rapidly”应改为“technology develops rapidly”。“social media”为复数，谓语应为“have appeared”。最后“communicate and talk”重复累赘，保留“communicate”更简洁。建议调整动词形式以符合主语（单数/复数），并避免冗余短语。