电子邮件— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Also correct small grammar ("work-related emails", plural).

示例: Not really. I rarely send emails except for academic or work-related matters, because I usually communicate informally through messaging apps.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, and use correct phrasing ("for academic purposes", "a professor at my university"). Add one clear reason linked with a connector.

示例: I usually send emails for academic purposes. For instance, when I need to contact a professor at my university, I prefer email because it is more formal and keeps a record of the conversation.

建议: Good direct answer and reason. Improve by using plural/phrasing ("for work purposes", "official means of communication") and add a short example or contrast with other tools using a linking word.

示例: Yes. Sending emails for work purposes is very common in China because employers and clients use it as an official means of communication. For example, companies often send formal notices and contracts by email rather than by chat apps.

建议: Avoid repetition and numeric text in speech. Give a concise topic sentence, then one specific reason and an example. Use linking words and clearer vocabulary ("technology-based", "communicate with one another").

示例: I think email will remain popular in the future because businesses need formal records of communication. For example, even with new apps, companies will still use email for invoices, contracts and official notices.

× Not really, I'm not used to sending emails uh unless it is for my academic or work related e-mail.

✓ Not really, I'm not used to sending emails unless they are for my academic or work-related email.

The phrase 'used to' is followed by a gerund 'sending' which is correct; however 'it is' referring to 'emails' is singular while 'emails' is plural—this is a subject-pronoun agreement issue connected to number. Use 'they are' to match plural 'emails'. Also add a hyphen in 'work-related' and remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: match plural nouns with plural pronouns and maintain parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I think I would only send emails for academic purpose.

✓ I think I would only send emails for academic purposes.

The noun 'purpose' in this context is a general, countable idea and is commonly used in the plural form 'purposes' when speaking about reasons in general. Use 'academic purposes' or add an article 'for an academic purpose' for singular. Also 'emails' plural matches 'purposes'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× For example, uh, when I have to contact UH professor of my university, I would send him an e-mail 'cause it it will be more appropriate.

✓ For example, when I have to contact a UH professor at my university, I would send him an email because it would be more appropriate.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'UH professor' because the speaker refers to any professor, not a specific one. Use the preposition 'at' with 'my university'. Replace informal ''cause' with 'because' and remove duplicate 'it'. Also 'email' without hyphen is acceptable. Suggestion: use appropriate articles and prepositions and avoid filler words. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, I would say sending emails for work purpose is really common in our country because it is an official form of connecting through clients and managers.

✓ Yes, I would say sending emails for work purposes is really common in our country because it is an official way of connecting with clients and managers.

Use 'work purposes' plural (see earlier) and the preposition 'with' (connect with someone), not 'through' in this context. 'Way' fits better than 'form' but 'form' could be used; keep consistency. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions for relationships (connect with) and pluralize 'purposes' when general. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I think it will be more popular in the future as we are living in a world of technology.

✓ I think it will be more popular in the future as we live in a technological world.

'We are living in' is grammatical (present continuous) but 'we live in' (present simple) is more natural for general truths. Also 'a world of technology' is better expressed as 'a technological world'. Suggestion: use present simple for general statements and prefer adjective 'technological' for conciseness. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So I think people will shift to more technology based things in the future for connecting to 1 to another.

✓ So I think people will shift to more technology-based methods in the future to connect with one another.

Use hyphen 'technology-based' when using as a compound adjective. Replace vague 'things' with 'methods' or 'means'. 'Connecting to 1 to another' is incorrect: use 'connect with one another' (pronoun 'one another' and preposition 'with'). Suggestion: avoid numerals in text and use correct pronouns and prepositions for reciprocity. Grammar problem type ID:12