电子邮件— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and tense) and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail about when or why you send emails. Use linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I send emails regularly for work. For example, I usually send at least one email each day to update my manager on project progress or to reply to client inquiries.

建议: Improve word choice and grammar (use 'send' not 'sense', 'attach' not 'attack'). Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific situations with a linking word to explain.

示例: I usually send emails when I need to share detailed updates or important documents. For instance, I send an email to attach reports or to explain changes in a project so recipients have a written record.

建议: Make sentences clearer and fix grammar and vocabulary (use 'popular' carefully). Provide a direct answer and one or two specific contrasts, using linking words like 'however' or 'instead'.

示例: Not really; email is mainly used for work. Instead, people prefer messaging apps like WeChat for chatting with friends or colleagues because they are faster and more convenient.

建议: Use a clear prediction sentence and give specific reasons. Correct grammar (include subject, plural forms) and use linking words such as 'because' or 'as a result'.

示例: I think email will become less popular in daily life because messaging apps offer quicker, more informal communication. As a result, people will reserve email mainly for formal or official purposes.

× I often sends emails during work at least one per day, because my work is have to communicate via e-mail to update a work and reply.

✓ I often send emails during work, at least one per day, because my work requires communicating via email to provide updates and replies.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb, so 'sends' is incorrect; it should be 'send' (third person singular applies only to he/she/it). Additionally, 'my work is have to communicate' is incorrect structure: use 'my work requires communicating' to express necessity. 'via e-mail' is fine but 'e-mail' is more commonly 'email' and 'to update a work and reply' is awkward; use 'to provide updates and replies' for clarity. Suggestion: match verb form to subject and use correct verb patterns like 'require + -ing' or 'need to + infinitive'.

× I often sends emails during work at least one per day, because my work is have to communicate via e-mail to update a work and reply.

✓ I often send emails during work, at least one per day, because my work requires communicating via email to provide updates and replies.

The phrase 'at least one per day' should be integrated with present simple timing; the overall statement describes a habitual action so present simple is appropriate. Also 'is have to' mixes tenses and modal-like structure incorrectly; use present simple 'requires' to describe job duties. Suggestion: use present simple consistently for habitual routines and simple facts about work.

× I often sends emails during work at least one per day, because my work is have to communicate via e-mail to update a work and reply.

✓ I often send emails during work, at least one per day, because my work requires communicating via email to provide updates and replies.

After verbs like 'requires' or expressions of necessity, use the gerund form 'communicating' rather than an infinitive or incorrect construction. 'Require communicating' or 'requires me to communicate' are correct patterns. Suggestion: choose 'require + -ing' or 'require + object + to-infinitive' consistently.

× I would rather sense an e-mail to other when I have to update with a detail or have to attack the file.

✓ I would rather send an email to others when I need to provide details or attach a file.

The student wrote 'sense' instead of 'send' (wrong verb) and used 'attack the file' which is incorrect; the correct verb is 'attach' meaning to add a file. 'I would rather' is used incorrectly for habitual action; 'I usually send' or 'I would send' in conditional contexts works. Here 'when I need to provide details' uses present simple for habitual action. Also use plural 'others' or 'other people' and 'attach a file' for correct meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb forms 'send' and 'attach' and match tense/aspect to context.

× I would rather sense an e-mail to other when I have to update with a detail or have to attack the file.

✓ I would rather send an email to others when I need to provide details or attach a file.

The phrase 'to other' is incorrect; use 'to others' or 'to other people' when referring to multiple recipients. Also 'an e-mail' can be 'an email' and 'with a detail' should be 'provide details'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun/plural forms match the intended plural recipients and use natural collocations like 'provide details' and 'attach a file'.

× It is not quite popular here because we use the e-mail only when working, but when we have to communicate with our friends or sometime in colleague in the shop way, we use the application instead.

✓ It is not very popular here because we use email only at work, but when we have to communicate with friends or sometimes with colleagues in informal situations, we use messaging apps instead.

Problems: 'the e-mail' is unnecessary; use 'email' without 'the'. 'Our friends' is fine but 'sometime in colleague' is wrong: 'sometimes with colleagues' is correct plural. 'in the shop way' is unclear; use 'in informal situations' or 'in person'. Also 'application' should be plural or 'messaging apps'. Suggestion: fix articles and plural nouns to match meaning and use natural collocations.

× It is not quite popular here because we use the e-mail only when working, but when we have to communicate with our friends or sometime in colleague in the shop way, we use the application instead.

✓ It is not very popular here because we use email only at work, but when we have to communicate with friends or sometimes with colleagues in person, we use messaging apps instead.

Preposition errors: use 'at work' rather than 'during work' or 'when working' for the general statement. Use 'with colleagues' not 'in colleague'. 'In the shop way' is not idiomatic; 'in person' or 'face-to-face' is clearer. Suggestion: choose prepositions that fit common expressions: 'at work', 'with friends', 'with colleagues', 'in person'.

× It is not quite popular here because we use the e-mail only when working, but when we have to communicate with our friends or sometime in colleague in the shop way, we use the application instead.

✓ It is not very popular here because we use email only at work, but when we have to communicate with friends or sometimes with colleagues in person, we use messaging apps instead.

The sentence describes habitual present behaviors, so present simple ('use') is correct; however adverbs like 'sometimes' should be placed correctly. Also 'is not quite popular' is awkward—'not very popular' is more natural in present context. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and place frequency adverbs near the main verb.

× I think is less popular in the future because right now we have a varied applications that can send it informal or update.

✓ I think it will be less popular in the future because right now we have various applications that can send informal messages or quick updates.

The original sentence misses the subject 'it' before 'is', misuses tense for future prediction, and has noun/verb agreement errors ('a varied applications' incorrect). Use 'I think it will be less popular' for future prediction. 'varied applications' should be 'various applications' or 'a variety of applications', and 'send it informal or update' is ungrammatical—use 'send informal messages or quick updates'. Suggestion: include the subject, use 'will' for future predictions, ensure noun-adjective agreement, and use correct collocations.

× I think is less popular in the future because right now we have a varied applications that can send it informal or update.

✓ I think it will be less popular in the future because right now we have various applications that can send informal messages or quick updates.

Predicting future popularity requires future tense modal 'will' with a clear subject: 'I think it will be...'. The original omitted 'it' and used present tense incorrectly for a future prediction. Suggestion: use 'will' or 'is likely to' plus subject for future predictions.

× No need to write the e-mail anymore.

✓ There is no need to write emails anymore.

Short informal sentence omits subject; use 'There is no need' to state general lack of necessity. Also use plural 'emails' for general reference rather than 'the e-mail'. Suggestion: use 'there is no need to' for general statements and pluralize when referring generally.