艺术— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết hỗ trợ. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I really into pain'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

示例: Yes, I like drawing very much. When I was a child, I enjoyed painting and drawing my favorite pictures because it helped me express my creativity.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh thông tin không liên quan như 'reading book in gallery'. Câu trả lời nên tự nhiên, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'a big fan of book'.

示例: Yes, I enjoy going to art galleries because I like to see different paintings and learn about artists' styles.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên mở rộng thêm lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: I want to learn more about art because it includes many forms like music, painting, and cinema. Especially, I am interested in music and would like to understand different genres and instruments better.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như 'Umm' và 'uh' trong bài thi. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp như 'paintings is' nên là 'painting is'.

示例: Yes, I definitely learned drawing when I was a child. Painting was a compulsory subject in both primary and secondary schools in Vietnam, so I had many opportunities to practice it.

× Yes, I like painting. Drawing especially when I was a child I really into pain and draw my favorite pictures.

✓ Yes, I like painting. Especially when I was a child, I was really into painting and drawing my favorite pictures.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Drawing especially when I was a child I really into pain and draw my favorite pictures.' The verb 'like' is followed by gerunds 'painting' and 'drawing'. The phrase 'I really into pain' is missing the verb 'was' and 'pain' should be 'painting'. Also, 'draw' should be in the gerund form 'drawing' to match the structure. The corrected sentence uses 'was really into painting and drawing' to properly express past interest using the verb 'to be' plus 'into' and gerunds.

× Absolutely yes. I am a big fan of book and I spend my spare time reading book in gallery.

✓ Absolutely yes. I am a big fan of books and I spend my spare time reading books in galleries.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to books in general. Also, 'gallery' should be plural 'galleries' if referring to multiple places or remain singular if one specific gallery is meant. Here, plural is more natural. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× I think it depends because there are a variety of art such as music, paintings or cinema.

✓ I think it depends because there is a variety of art such as music, paintings, or cinema.

The phrase 'a variety of' is singular and should be followed by 'is' not 'are'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there are a variety'. The correction uses 'there is a variety' to agree with the singular subject.

× Definitely yes. When I was a child I learned drawing and painting pictures in my school. Umm, actually paintings is a compulsory subject, uh, primary and secondary school in Vietnam.

✓ Definitely yes. When I was a child I learned drawing and painting pictures in my school. Umm, actually painting is a compulsory subject in primary and secondary school in Vietnam.

The word 'paintings' is plural but used with singular verb 'is'. The correct form is 'painting' (singular) as a subject or course name, which takes singular verb 'is'. Also, the phrase 'uh, primary and secondary school' needs 'in' before it to be grammatically correct.