天赋— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'It's make me feel' nên là 'It makes me feel'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have a talent for singing. I feel confident and happy when I perform in front of an audience. Because of this, my relatives often encourage me to join music shows, which helps me improve my skills.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn về thời điểm bạn thành thạo kỹ năng này. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác như 'a talented' nên là 'talent'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I have been developing my singing talent since I was young. Currently, I join my school's music club and perform in various shows, even at other schools, which helps me gain more experience.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên, ví dụ 'helpful my to my future work' nên là 'helpful for my future work'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

示例: No, I don't think my singing talent will be useful for my future career because I want to work in a different field. However, singing helps me relax and express my emotions when I am stressed.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'I amazed about' nên là 'I am amazed by'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

示例: I think my sister has the same talent. Recently, we went to karaoke together during summer holidays, and I was amazed by her vocal skills. She can hit high notes perfectly, so I am very proud and appreciate her talent.

× most of my relatives say that I'm good at singing

✓ most of my relatives said that I was good at singing

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the verb tense should be in the past to maintain consistency.

× I'm really enjoying singing

✓ I really enjoy singing

The present continuous tense ('I'm really enjoying') is not appropriate here because the statement is about a general feeling or habit, so the simple present tense should be used.

× It's make me feel happy and cheerful

✓ It makes me feel happy and cheerful

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject.

× most of my relatives say that I'm good at singing

✓ most of my relatives said that I was good at singing

Since the time frame is in the past ('When I was a child'), the verb 'say' should be in the past tense 'said' and 'I'm' should be 'I was' to maintain tense consistency.

× my friends are amazed my vocal skill when I raise my voice

✓ my friends were amazed by my vocal skill when I raised my voice

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Also, 'amazed' requires the preposition 'by' to indicate the cause of amazement.

× my friends are amazed my vocal skill

✓ my friends are amazed by my vocal skill

The verb 'amazed' is usually followed by the preposition 'by' to indicate what causes the amazement.

× I really have a talented in it

✓ I really have talent in it

The word 'talented' is an adjective, but here a noun 'talent' is needed. Also, the article 'a' is unnecessary before 'talent' in this context.

× I perform a a lot of the show of my school

✓ I perform a lot of the shows at my school

The phrase 'a a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot'. Also, 'show' should be plural 'shows' to match 'a lot of'. The preposition 'at' is more appropriate for locations like 'my school'.

× I perform a a lot of the show of my school and also to another school

✓ I perform a lot of the shows at my school and also at another school

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the location of performances.

× although I'm quite good at singing, but my dream job is not to become a singer

✓ although I'm quite good at singing, my dream job is not to become a singer

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant. One should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× it's not really helpful my to my future work

✓ it's not really helpful to my future work

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly placed and unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'helpful to my future work'.

× I just found it recently like we go to Karaki together a lot in our summer holidays

✓ I just found it recently; we went to Karaki together a lot during our summer holidays

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time frame. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and can be replaced with a semicolon or conjunction for clarity.

× I amazed about her vocal skill

✓ I was amazed by her vocal skill

The verb 'amazed' needs an auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past passive voice, and the preposition 'by' is required to indicate the cause.

× I amazed about her vocal skill

✓ I was amazed by her vocal skill

The correct preposition after 'amazed' is 'by', not 'about'.

× she play high note perfectly

✓ she plays high notes perfectly

The verb 'play' should be in the third person singular form 'plays' to agree with the subject 'she'. Also, 'high note' should be plural 'high notes' to indicate multiple notes.