天赋— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
考生
I'm good at drawing or design something. Because of that, I choose product design as my major in university.
考官
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
考生
To be honest, when I was a child I had a hobby is that I like to drawing on the wall, so my parents found that and they support me. So now I didn't give up and use it.
考官
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
考生
Work definitely, I think drawing is has a close connect with my future work, because if you want to design or make a perfect product, the important step is to draw the.
考官
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
考生
Yes, that's my sister she were she is 6 years old and she loved drawing very much so I gave her I used painting pen or drawing book she was like very much.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you have a talent or something you are good at?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较简单，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确性。
示例: I am good at drawing and designing, which is why I chose product design as my major at university.
Was it mastered recently or when you were young?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且信息重复。建议简洁明了地表达时间点和经历，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
示例: I developed this talent when I was a child because I enjoyed drawing on walls, and my parents supported me, so I have continued to practice it until now.
Do you think your talent can be useful for your future work? Why?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。
示例: Definitely, I believe drawing is closely connected to my future work because designing a perfect product requires careful sketches as an important step.
Do you think anyone in your family has the same talent?
分数: 45.0建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，信息组织混乱。建议简洁明了地描述家庭成员和他们的兴趣，注意时态和句子结构。
示例: Yes, my six-year-old sister also loves drawing. I gave her some painting pens and a drawing book, and she really enjoys them.
语法
× I'm good at drawing or design something.
✓ I'm good at drawing or designing something.
动词短语中，介词后面应使用动名词形式，因此'design'应改为'designing'。
× Because of that, I choose product design as my major in university.
✓ Because of that, I chose product design as my major in university.
描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去式，'choose'应改为'chose'。
× To be honest, when I was a child I had a hobby is that I like to drawing on the wall, so my parents found that and they support me.
✓ To be honest, when I was a child, I had a hobby: I liked drawing on the wall, so my parents found out and supported me.
句子结构混乱，'I had a hobby is that'不正确，应改为'I had a hobby: I liked drawing'。另外，'like to drawing'应为'liked drawing'，动词时态和形式需调整。
× So now I didn't give up and use it.
✓ So now I haven't given up and still use it.
表达现在状态时，应使用现在完成时'haven't given up'，'use'前加副词'still'更自然。
× Work definitely, I think drawing is has a close connect with my future work, because if you want to design or make a perfect product, the important step is to draw the.
✓ Definitely work. I think drawing has a close connection with my future work, because if you want to design or make a perfect product, an important step is to draw it.
句子中多余的'is'应删除，'connect'应为名词'connection'，'draw the'不完整，应为'draw it'。
× Yes, that's my sister she were she is 6 years old and she loved drawing very much so I gave her I used painting pen or drawing book she was like very much.
✓ Yes, that's my sister. She is 6 years old and loves drawing very much, so I gave her painting pens and drawing books, which she likes very much.
句子中代词使用混乱，'she were she is'不正确，应为'she is'。另外，句子缺少标点，表达不清晰，需拆分并调整代词和时态。
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