天赋— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте избыточности и грамматических ошибок, например, "playing chess" вместо "playing the chess" и "good at communicating with other people" вместо "finds communication". Используйте связующие слова для плавности.

示例: Yes, I have a few talents. For example, I am good at playing chess because I enjoy strategic thinking. Also, I am good at communicating with others, which helps me in social situations.

建议: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные времена и избегать тавтологии. Добавьте связующие слова для логичности и конкретизируйте детали.

示例: I started developing my talent when I was young, around six or seven years old. I used to play chess regularly with my dad and grandfathers, which helped me improve.

建议: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Следует говорить более чётко, использовать правильную грамматику и объяснять, почему талант полезен. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

示例: I believe my talent in chess can be useful for my future work because it teaches me to think ahead and plan carefully. These skills are valuable in many jobs.

建议: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо, использовать правильную грамматику и связующие слова. Уточните, кто из семьи имеет или не имеет этот талант.

示例: Unfortunately, no one else in my family shares my talent for chess. My mom and little sisters don't like playing it, and although my dad enjoys it, he is not very skilled.

× I think that I have two or three talents.

✓ I think that I have two or three talents.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× the first one is playing the chess because actually I can say that I'm a leader in this play.

✓ the first one is playing chess because actually I can say that I'm a leader in this game.

The definite article 'the' is not used before 'chess' because it is an uncountable noun referring to the game in general. Also, 'play' should be 'game' to correctly refer to chess as a game.

× my talent is finds communication with other people.

✓ my talent is finding communication with other people.

After the verb 'is', the gerund form 'finding' should be used instead of 'finds' which is a third person singular present tense verb.

× Honestly, I can say that I started practice my talent when I was young.

✓ Honestly, I can say that I started practicing my talent when I was young.

After 'started', the verb should be in the gerund form 'practicing' not the base form 'practice'.

× maybe I was six or seven years old and I start and I was starting playing chess with my dad and my grandfathers.

✓ maybe I was six or seven years old and I started playing chess with my dad and my grandfathers.

The verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the past time reference. Also, 'was starting playing' is redundant; 'started playing' is correct.

× My dad said that my talents can be useful because when you playing the chess you can find a lot of steps and he said to me that if you if you could at chess, you will goods in your life.

✓ My dad said that my talents can be useful because when you play chess you can find a lot of steps and he said to me that if you are good at chess, you will be successful in your life.

'When you playing' should be 'when you play' (present simple after 'when'). 'If you could at chess' is incorrect; it should be 'if you are good at chess'. 'You will goods' is incorrect; it should be 'you will be successful' or similar.

× Unfortunately now because my mom and my little sisters don't like playing the chess my dad laughs and adores, but it's not his talent.

✓ Unfortunately now, because my mom and my little sisters don't like playing chess, my dad laughs and adores it, but it's not his talent.

'Playing the chess' should be 'playing chess' without 'the'. Also, a comma is needed after 'now' and before 'my dad' for clarity. 'Adore' needs an object, so 'adores it' is correct.