广告— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, when I was a child, I was impressed by a Shopee advertisement featuring my favorite football player, Ronaldo, which showed delicious food. It caught my attention because I really like him.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để làm rõ ý và tránh lặp từ.

示例: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains, such as one about Lamborghini cars. I think the car looks very nice, and it makes me want to own one someday.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích ý kiến của mình một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

示例: I think it depends on the person. Some people like advertisements because they can help businesses, but others find them boring.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lặp từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

示例: I like watching advertisements in lifts because after school, I often see ads that provide news from around the world, which helps me expand my knowledge.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý một cách mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I often see advertisements when I play games on my computer. They usually appear after I complete a level, which can be uncomfortable and sometimes interrupts the game.

× Just when I was a child, I'm I since I saw umm, Shopee's advertising that this advertising show the the food, the football player that I really like is Ronaldo.

✓ When I was a child, I saw Shopee's advertisement that showed the food and the football player I really like, Ronaldo.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order, making it confusing. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clear and grammatically correct form, using past tense 'saw' and 'showed' to match the time frame.

× Yes, uh, when I was addressed, I had sent a a advertising about the car is Lamborghini.

✓ Yes, when I was on the train, I saw an advertisement about the car Lamborghini.

The phrase 'when I was addressed' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was on the train' or similar. Also, 'had sent a a advertising' is incorrect; the student likely meant 'saw an advertisement'. Prepositions and article usage are corrected accordingly.

× That's when I was charged. I think the scar was very nice and when I'm rolled, I want to.

✓ That was when I was on the train. I think the car was very nice, and when I grow up, I want to have one.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'when I was charged' and 'when I'm rolled'. These are corrected to meaningful expressions with proper tense and structure.

× I think it's depend on some people for people is can bring a chance to business or from people they like is very. Bordered.

✓ I think it depends on some people; for some, it can bring a chance to business, or for people who like it, it can be very boring.

The original sentence misuses modal verbs and verb forms ('is depend', 'is can bring'). The correction uses correct modal verb forms and clarifies the meaning.

× I like, I like watching advertising in a lift, uh, because when I got home after school, I said advertising that gave me some information on news around the world and I can expand my knowledge.

✓ I like watching advertisements in the lift because when I get home after school, I see advertisements that give me information about news around the world and help me expand my knowledge.

The original sentence has incorrect tense ('got' should be 'get'), incorrect verb forms ('said' should be 'see'), and preposition use ('on news' should be 'about news'). These are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, when I'm playing the game on the computer, I often see the advertising.

✓ Yes, when I play games on the computer, I often see advertisements.

The phrase 'I'm playing the game' is acceptable but 'I play games' is more natural. Also, 'the advertising' should be plural 'advertisements' to match general meaning.

× When I complete the challenging and I think it's very uncomfortable and it's possible to stop the game.

✓ When I complete a challenge, I think it's very uncomfortable, and it is possible to stop the game.

The original sentence has unclear structure and word choice ('complete the challenging'). The correction uses 'complete a challenge' and clarifies the meaning with proper conjunctions and verb forms.