游泳— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like swimming?
考生
Yes I like swimming because while swimming I see many things like I feel my muscle gain stamina and also while swimming mice increases also the.
考官
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
考生
Yes, it's very difficult to learn stream because swimming under pool is very difficult for children with all the height of children is shorter than the poor and the pool is enough for deeper.
考官
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
考生
People in my country go for swimming different places but mostly people go on a swimming pools as well as other rich people go for foreign and abroad trip for swimming.
考官
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
考生
There are many difference between swimming in Pool or swimming in seas, but main differences in the pool. The depth of water is a measurable like up to 7 to 8 feet button on see the depth was not considerable and also there are many secret that Hamas.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like swimming?
分数: 50.0建议: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और शब्दावली की गलतियाँ हैं, जिससे आपकी बात स्पष्ट नहीं हो पा रही है। आपको अपने विचारों को सरल और स्पष्ट वाक्यों में व्यक्त करना चाहिए, और अनावश्यक शब्दों से बचना चाहिए।
示例: Yes, I like swimming because it helps me build muscle strength and stamina. Also, I enjoy observing the underwater environment while swimming.
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
分数: 40.0建议: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण और वाक्य संरचना की गलतियाँ हैं, जिससे अर्थ अस्पष्ट हो जाता है। आपको सीधे प्रश्न का उत्तर देना चाहिए और स्पष्ट कारण देना चाहिए।
示例: Yes, learning to swim can be difficult for children because the pool is deep, and their height makes it hard for them to touch the bottom.
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
分数: 55.0建议: आपके उत्तर में शब्दों का गलत उपयोग और वाक्य संरचना की समस्या है। आपको अपने उत्तर को सरल और स्पष्ट बनाना चाहिए, और उपयुक्त शब्दों का प्रयोग करना चाहिए।
示例: People in my country usually swim in swimming pools. However, wealthy people often travel abroad to swim in the sea or luxury resorts.
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
分数: 35.0建议: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरण, शब्दावली और स्पष्टता की कमी है। आपको मुख्य अंतर को स्पष्ट रूप से बताना चाहिए और उपयुक्त शब्दों का उपयोग करना चाहिए।
示例: The main difference is that swimming pools have a fixed depth, usually around 7 to 8 feet, while the sea has varying depths. Also, the sea has waves and marine life, which pools do not have.
语法
× Yes I like swimming because while swimming I see many things like I feel my muscle gain stamina and also while swimming mice increases also the.
✓ Yes, I like swimming because while swimming I see many things, like I feel my muscles gaining stamina, and also while swimming, my pace increases.
यहाँ 'gain' को 'gaining' में बदलना आवश्यक है क्योंकि यह क्रिया 'feel' के बाद आ रही है और continuous action को दर्शाती है। 'muscle' को 'muscles' में बदलना चाहिए क्योंकि यह बहुवचन में है। 'mice' गलत शब्द है, सही शब्द 'pace' हो सकता है। वाक्य में विराम चिह्नों का उपयोग सुधारना आवश्यक है।
× Yes, it's very difficult to learn stream because swimming under pool is very difficult for children with all the height of children is shorter than the poor and the pool is enough for deeper.
✓ Yes, it's very difficult to learn to swim because swimming in a pool is very difficult for children as their height is shorter than the pool's depth, and the pool is quite deep.
यहाँ 'learn stream' गलत है, सही होगा 'learn to swim'। 'swimming under pool' गलत प्रीपोजीशन है, सही है 'swimming in a pool'। 'with all the height of children is shorter than the poor' वाक्य संरचना गलत है, इसे सुधारना आवश्यक है। 'poor' की जगह 'pool' होना चाहिए।
× People in my country go for swimming different places but mostly people go on a swimming pools as well as other rich people go for foreign and abroad trip for swimming.
✓ People in my country go swimming in different places, but mostly people go to swimming pools, and rich people also go abroad for swimming trips.
यहाँ 'go for swimming different places' गलत है, सही होगा 'go swimming in different places'। 'go on a swimming pools' में 'a' और 'pools' का मेल नहीं है, इसे 'go to swimming pools' करना चाहिए। 'foreign and abroad trip' में redundancy है, 'abroad' पर्याप्त है।
× There are many difference between swimming in Pool or swimming in seas, but main differences in the pool.
✓ There are many differences between swimming in a pool and swimming in the sea, but the main difference is in the pool.
'difference' को बहुवचन 'differences' में बदलना चाहिए क्योंकि 'many' के साथ बहुवचन आता है। 'Pool' और 'seas' में consistency होनी चाहिए, इसलिए 'a pool' और 'the sea' सही है। 'main differences' को 'main difference' करना चाहिए क्योंकि यहाँ एक मुख्य अंतर की बात हो रही है।
× The depth of water is a measurable like up to 7 to 8 feet button on see the depth was not considerable and also there are many secret that Hamas.
✓ The depth of water is measurable, like up to 7 to 8 feet in the pool, but in the sea, the depth is not consistent, and also there are many secrets that I have.
'a measurable' गलत है, सही है 'measurable'। 'button on see' गलत प्रीपोजीशन और शब्द है, इसे 'in the pool, but in the sea' करना चाहिए। 'not considerable' को 'not consistent' या 'not fixed' करना बेहतर होगा। 'secret that Hamas' समझ में नहीं आता, संभवतः 'secrets that I have' या 'secrets that exist' होना चाहिए।
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