朋友— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşu və ifadələrdə qarışıqlıq var. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurmağa çalışın. Məsələn, dostunuzla əlaqənizi və nə qədər zamandır tanıdığınızı aydın şəkildə ifadə edin.

示例: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known for a long time. We have been friends since childhood, and I really value our friendship.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və məna qarışıqlığı var. Fəaliyyətləri daha dəqiq və aydın ifadə edin, və cümlələri düzgün qurun.

示例: We usually exercise together and enjoy doing fun activities like watching movies or playing games.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi tam ifadə edin. "You can imagine what happens next" kimi qeyri-müəyyən ifadələrdən çəkinin.

示例: We often meet at school since she is my classmate. After school, we usually go home together and spend time chatting.

建议: Cavabınız mövzu ilə əlaqəsiz və qarışıqdır. Suallara birbaşa və aydın cavab verin, lazımsız sözlərdən və qeyri-müəyyən ifadələrdən çəkinin.

示例: Yes, I often go out with my close friends. I especially enjoy spending time with my best friend Mariam.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə daha çox dəqiqlik və məzmun əlavə edin. Niyə dostlar sizin üçün vacibdir, bunu daha ətraflı izah edin.

示例: Friends are very important to me because they provide support and companionship. I enjoy spending time with them and sharing my experiences.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və təkrarlamalar var. Niyə bir dostla vaxt keçirməyi üstün tutduğunuzu aydın və qısa şəkildə ifadə edin.

示例: I prefer spending time with one friend because it allows for better conversation and connection. I especially enjoy spending time with my friend Mariam.

建议: Cavabınız yaxşıdır, amma cümlələri daha səlis və qısa edin. Əlavə olaraq, dostları evə dəvət etməyin səbəbini də əlavə edə bilərsiniz.

示例: Of course, I often invite my friends to my home and visit theirs. I think it's a great way to strengthen our friendship.

建议: Cavabınız çox qısa və mənasızdır. Suallara tam və aydın cavab verin, keçmiş və indiki görüş yerləri arasındakı fərqləri izah edin.

示例: Yes, in the past we used to meet at school or parks, but now we often meet at home or cafes.

建议: Cavabınız mövzu ilə əlaqəsiz və qarışıqdır. Suallara mövzuya uyğun, aydın və məntiqli cavab verin.

示例: Some places are suitable for meeting friends because they are comfortable and quiet, like cafes or parks, while others, like toilets, are not appropriate.

× Yes I have she already with me sitting near me and I love my friend she we we are friends since 1. Great.

✓ Yes, I have. She is already sitting near me, and I love my friend. We have been friends since 1st grade.

The original sentence has run-on issues and incorrect conjunction use, making it confusing. Separating ideas into clear sentences and using proper conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× We usually done our exercise together and doing something good things together in the bed.

✓ We usually do our exercises together and do good things together in bed.

'Done' is the past participle and incorrect here; the simple present 'do' fits the habitual action. Also, 'doing' should be 'do' to maintain parallel structure. 'In the bed' is better as 'in bed' without 'the'.

× And we often meet each other at school because she is my classmate. And then we go to home and you you can imagine but happens next.

✓ We often meet at school because she is my classmate. Then we go home, and you can imagine what happens next.

Starting sentences with 'And' is informal and can be omitted. 'Go to home' is incorrect; it should be 'go home'. The phrase 'you you can imagine but happens next' is ungrammatical and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Yes, I appreciate it because I don't have a lot of friends, but I haven't like best friends, best friends forever. It's my wife, Mariam. Maryam. Jealous *****. No, your limbs, *****.

✓ Yes, I appreciate it because I don't have a lot of friends, but I have a best friend, best friends forever. She is my wife, Mariam.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and incomplete thoughts. Correcting pronouns and clarifying relationships improves understanding.

× It is really important because it is part of my life and I often see her and it's important to me to be good with her.

✓ Friends are really important because they are part of my life. I often see my friend, and it's important to me to have a good relationship with her.

Using 'it' to refer to friends is incorrect; plural pronouns should be used. Also, 'be good with her' is better expressed as 'have a good relationship with her'.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend because if I spend time with group of friends, they can they will ignore me 'cause I'm the diva, they can't ignore me. So if I gonna spend time with my one friend, we can just we can spend our time good and I love Mariam.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend because if I spend time with a group of friends, they might ignore me since I'm the diva; they can't ignore me. So if I spend time with my one friend, we can just spend our time well, and I love Mariam.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect conjunctions. 'Gonna' is informal and should be 'going to' or omitted. 'Spend our time good' should be 'spend our time well'.

× Of course I would they always in my home and I'm always in their home and I see nothing wrong with it and I surely would invite them to my house.

✓ Of course I would. They are always at my home, and I'm always at theirs. I see nothing wrong with it, and I would surely invite them to my house.

Run-on sentence with missing verbs and incorrect prepositions. Adding verbs and proper conjunctions improves clarity.

× I go into the. House.

✓ I go into the house.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Completing the sentence with the correct noun and removing the period improves grammatical correctness.

× I personally think umm you can meet your friend in toilet because it's not suitable. A book is chose a handgun is it and I've been on chocolates. Enjoyed that first.

✓ I personally think you cannot meet your friend in the toilet because it's not suitable. A book is chosen, a handgun is it, and I've been on chocolates. I enjoyed that first.

The sentence is confusing and contains incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. 'In toilet' should be 'in the toilet'. The rest of the sentence is unclear and may need context to correct fully.