朋友— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity by using correct plural forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice.

示例: Yes, I have a couple of best friends whom I've known since elementary school, so we've been friends for over 20 years, which is more than half of my life.

建议: Use clearer sentence structures and correct verb forms. Specify activities more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'couples time'.

示例: We usually hang out on weekends, and every year we plan a trip abroad together, usually once or twice a year.

建议: Clarify the meaning and correct vocabulary and grammar errors. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: We usually meet at the mall because it's convenient and offers many activities. However, if someone has moved to a new place, we sometimes meet there instead.

建议: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Use plural forms correctly and provide more specific details.

示例: Yes, I often go out with my friends every week. One of our favorite activities is having dinner together.

建议: Use clearer and grammatically correct sentences. Express your feelings about friends more naturally and specifically.

示例: Friends are very important to me because I care about them and want them to have a good life in every aspect.

建议: Clarify your preference and correct vocabulary and grammar errors. Use linking words to explain reasons.

示例: Actually, I prefer spending time with one friend because we can share activities that we both enjoy more easily.

建议: Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Make your answer clearer and more coherent.

示例: Yes, I used to invite my friends to my home when I was younger, but now many of them have moved away, so we don't do that as often.

建议: Improve grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to compare past and present meeting places clearly.

示例: Yes, when we were young, we met at school or at someone's home. But now, we usually meet in public places like restaurants or cafes.

建议: Complete your ideas clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Use linking words to explain reasons logically.

示例: It depends on the activity. If you just want a casual place to chat and catch up, a cafe is a good choice because you can order coffee and desserts. However, for serious discussions, a quieter or more private place is better.

× I have a couple best friend that we know each other from elementary school, so we've been together for 20 years.

✓ I have a couple of best friends that we have known each other since elementary school, so we've been together for 20 years.

The phrase 'a couple best friend' is incorrect because 'couple' implies more than one, so the noun 'friend' should be pluralized to 'friends'. Also, 'couple' should be followed by 'of' to be grammatically correct. Additionally, 'know' should be in the present perfect tense 'have known' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

× We usually hang around at the weekend and every year we plan to get a trip like an go abroad once or couples time per year.

✓ We usually hang around on the weekend and every year we plan to take a trip, like going abroad once or a couple of times per year.

The phrase 'like an go abroad' is incorrect; 'go' should be in the '-ing' form 'going' after 'like'. Also, 'couples time' should be 'a couple of times' to correctly express frequency. 'At the weekend' is more commonly 'on the weekend' in this context.

× We usually miss as the more because it's convenient and have a lot of activity to do.

✓ We usually meet at the mall because it's convenient and has a lot of activities to do.

The word 'miss' is incorrect here; it should be 'meet'. 'As the more' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'at the mall'. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'mall'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'a lot of'.

× But sometime if their new place we miss each other days.

✓ But sometimes if there is a new place, we meet each other on different days.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Their' is incorrect; it should be 'there'. 'Miss each other days' is incorrect; it should be 'meet each other on different days' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes I do, I often go with my friend every week.

✓ Yes, I do. I often go out with my friends every week.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of going out regularly with more than one friend. Also, adding a comma after 'Yes' improves clarity.

× One the of the most activity that we will do together is have a dinner.

✓ One of the most common activities that we do together is having dinner.

'One the of' is incorrect; it should be 'One of the'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'most'. 'Have a dinner' is unnatural; 'having dinner' is the correct expression.

× For me, friend is my priority too, that the people that I care and I hold them have a good in every aspect of their life.

✓ For me, friends are my priority too; they are the people I care about and want to see have a good life in every aspect.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'That the people' is incorrect; 'they are the people' is correct. 'Hold them have a good' is ungrammatical; it should be 'want to see have a good'. Also, 'life' should be singular.

× Actually, I do prefer to spend time with one friend because when I go out with this one friend, we are chair the activity dash we both enjoy together.

✓ Actually, I prefer to spend time with one friend because when I go out with this one friend, we share activities that we both enjoy together.

'Are chair the activity dash' is incorrect; it should be 'share activities'. The phrase 'dash' is likely a filler or error and should be removed. 'Do prefer' can be simplified to 'prefer'.

× Yes I used to be in my friend to my home when I was young but this day my friend liking she days moved off don't live nearby my house so we doesn't do is much.

✓ Yes, I used to invite my friends to my home when I was young, but these days my friends have moved away and don't live near my house, so we don't do it much.

'Used to be in my friend to my home' is incorrect; it should be 'used to invite my friends to my home'. 'This day' should be 'these days'. 'My friend liking she days moved off' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my friends have moved away'. 'Don't live nearby' is correct but 'near my house' is more natural. 'We doesn't do is much' should be 'we don't do it much'.

× Yes, it is at the past when we were young, we meet each other at school and umm, someone home.

✓ Yes, in the past when we were young, we met each other at school and at someone's home.

'It is at the past' is incorrect; it should be 'in the past'. 'Meet' should be past tense 'met' to match 'were young'. 'Someone home' should be 'someone's home' to show possession.

× But now we miss each other as public space or the restaurant or the cafe.

✓ But now we meet each other in public spaces, restaurants, or cafes.

'Miss each other as' is incorrect; it should be 'meet each other in'. 'Public space' should be plural 'public spaces' to match 'restaurants' and 'cafes'. 'The' before 'restaurant' and 'cafe' is unnecessary here.

× Is depends on your activity.

✓ It depends on your activity.

The subject pronoun 'It' is required here instead of 'Is' to form a correct sentence.

× If you just want some space to just check around or just update the information, the cover is a good choice because you just order this one coffee and desserts.

✓ If you just want some space to look around or update information, the café is a good choice because you can just order a coffee and desserts.

'Check around' is unnatural; 'look around' is better. 'The information' should be 'information' without 'the' as it is uncountable here. 'The cover' is incorrect; likely meant 'the café'. 'This one coffee' should be 'a coffee'.

× But sometimes if you have to take a serious thing it is.

✓ But sometimes, if you have to discuss something serious, it is better to choose another place.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.