网站— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
考生
I often visit the USA Major League Baseball's official site and because I can browse many statistics and records from very old times, for example in 1920s or 1930s.
考官
What is your favourite website?
考生
My favorite website is YouTube because since I was a child I have used the video platforms for a long time. It takes two or three hours watching it, especially on weekends.
考官
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
考生
Yes, it seems that the amount of videos has increased over the past 10 years because the speed of the communication has accelerated recently.
考官
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
考生
It seems that many young people attend to, uh, watch social media. It suggests Tiktok or Instagram. When I was a child, there were two or three Japanese platforms, but recently people tend to use a service from abroad.
评估
总分
Part 1
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法的に不自然な部分や冗長な表現があります。例えば、「and because」の使い方が不適切で、文を分けて明確にする必要があります。また、具体的な詳細をもう少し自然な形で述べると良いでしょう。
示例: I often visit the official website of the USA Major League Baseball because it allows me to browse many statistics and records dating back to the 1920s and 1930s.
What is your favourite website?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法や表現に不自然な部分があります。例えば、「since I was a child I have used the video platforms for a long time」は冗長で、「I have been using YouTube since I was a child」のように簡潔に表現できます。また、「It takes two or three hours watching it」は不自然なので、視聴時間を自然に表現しましょう。
示例: My favorite website is YouTube because I have been using it since I was a child. I usually spend two or three hours watching videos there, especially on weekends.
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法的に不自然な表現があります。「the amount of videos」は「the number of videos」が適切です。また、「the speed of the communication has accelerated recently」は少し不自然なので、「internet speed has improved recently」など具体的に言い換えると良いでしょう。
示例: Yes, the number of videos has increased over the past 10 years because internet speeds have improved recently.
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答は内容が伝わりにくく、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。「attend to, uh, watch social media」は不自然で、「many young people use social media platforms such as TikTok or Instagram」のように言い換える必要があります。また、「It suggests」は不適切な表現です。全体的に文を整理し、具体的に述べることが求められます。
示例: Many young people in my country use social media platforms such as TikTok and Instagram. When I was a child, there were two or three Japanese platforms, but recently, people tend to use services from abroad.
语法
× It takes two or three hours watching it, especially on weekends.
✓ I spend two or three hours watching it, especially on weekends.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'takes' with 'watching'. The verb 'take' is not used with an activity in the '-ing' form to express duration. Instead, 'spend' is the correct verb to indicate the amount of time devoted to an activity. Therefore, 'I spend two or three hours watching it' is correct.
× It seems that many young people attend to, uh, watch social media.
✓ It seems that many young people watch social media.
The verb 'attend' is incorrectly used with the preposition 'to' and is unnecessary here. The correct verb to describe using social media is 'watch' or 'use'. Therefore, 'many young people watch social media' is correct.
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