网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法正确性，例如使用完整的句子和适当的连接词。

示例: I often visit shopping websites because they are more convenient than physical stores, and I can find a wider variety of products that are not available offline.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意冠词的使用，句子结构更自然，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: My favorite website is Taobao because I can buy many items like shoes and clothes at lower prices, and the customer service is excellent. If I have any problems, I can easily contact the website's manager for assistance.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免直译，句子结构更自然，并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

示例: Yes, the biggest change on Taobao is that prices have dropped significantly due to intense competition among online shopping websites. Therefore, Taobao has introduced discount policies to attract more customers.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意比较级的正确使用，并丰富细节。

示例: I think video websites are very popular in my country because they are more convenient than television and radio. People can watch videos anytime and anywhere, which makes these websites very appealing.

× I often visit a shopping website because it's more handy than offline shops and I also can buy more categories of items the physical shop not have.

✓ I often visit a shopping website because it's handier than offline shops and I can also buy more categories of items that physical shops do not have.

这里handy是形容词，比较级应为handier，表示“更方便”。另外，items是复数，后面应使用复数形式的shops，并且需要加上关系代词that引导定语从句，动词用do not have。

× The Taobao is my favorite website because I can usually buy a lot of stuff such as shoes, clothes in a cheaper way and the service of the website is so excellent.

✓ Taobao is my favorite website because I can usually buy a lot of stuff such as shoes and clothes more cheaply, and the service of the website is excellent.

专有名词Taobao前不需要定冠词the。'in a cheaper way'应改为副词形式more cheaply。'shoes, clothes'之间应加and。

× If you have some problem you can ask them manager of the website for help.

✓ If you have some problem, you can ask the manager of the website for help.

them是宾格复数代词，不能修饰manager，应使用定冠词the。

× Yes, the biggest change in Taobao is there's a price decrease a lot compared with before because the web shopping websites have a violent competitions.

✓ Yes, the biggest change in Taobao is that there has been a big price decrease compared with before because the online shopping websites have fierce competition.

there's是there is的缩写，后面应接名词短语，这里应使用there has been表示过去到现在的变化。'a price decrease a lot'表达不自然，应改为a big price decrease。'violent competitions'搭配不当，应改为fierce competition。

× So the Taobao implement the discounted policy to catch the clients.

✓ So Taobao implements a discount policy to attract clients.

专有名词Taobao前不需要定冠词the。动词implement应使用第三人称单数形式implements。'discounted policy'应改为discount policy。'catch the clients'表达不当，应改为attract clients。

× I think the video website is more popular in my country because it's convenient than the television and the radios.

✓ I think video websites are more popular in my country because they are more convenient than television and radio.

video website应使用复数形式video websites。'it's convenient than'应改为they are more convenient than。television和radio前不需要定冠词the。

× You can use it everywhere and every time, so people prefer this handy thing, I think.

✓ You can use it everywhere and at any time, so people prefer this handy thing, I think.

every time应改为at any time，表示任何时候。