网站— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和单复数形式的正确使用，同时避免重复和冗余表达。可以尝试简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I rarely use websites because I prefer apps to find information or shop directly. However, I often visit the Oxford Dictionary website since it contains comprehensive information that I can't find in any app.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法和用词错误，如“can't just download”和“practice my art English”。建议加强句子结构的准确性，避免模糊表达，并使用恰当的词汇。

示例: My favorite website is YouTube because, due to restrictions in my country, I cannot download the app. The website offers many English videos that help me practice spoken English and learn slang.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且部分内容不清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并明确表达观点。

示例: There haven't been changes to the websites I visit, but the content has changed because the algorithm knows my interests. Recently, since I'm preparing for the IELTS exam, most content is about speaking tests, so I spend less time browsing.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用更自然的方式介绍该网站的功能和受欢迎的原因。

示例: In my country, an educational website called Juwan is popular. It means 'knowledge website.' Many people publish articles or periodicals on specific fields there, allowing others to find new information and share their own work.

× Oh, I seldom use the website because I often download some applications to search for the information or some items directly.

✓ Oh, I seldom use websites because I often download some applications to search for information or some items directly.

这里的“website”应该用复数形式“websites”，因为说的是一般情况，访问多种网站。英语中表示泛指时，通常用复数形式。

× But they I often use the Oxford Dictionary website because it have full of information and I can't find a direct application of the of it.

✓ But I often use the Oxford Dictionary website because it has a lot of information and I can't find a direct application of it.

主语是单数“it”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。此外，“have full of information”表达不正确，应改为“has a lot of information”。

× I can't find a direct application of the of it.

✓ I can't find a direct application of it.

“of the of it”是多余且错误的表达，应去掉多余的“the of”，保持“of it”即可。

× So I often visit this kind of website.

✓ So I often visit this kind of website.

此句语法无误，符合习惯表达。

× So I just can't set the website and there are many English videos that can help me to practice my art English and learn some slang.

✓ So I just can't access the website and there are many English videos that can help me practice my English and learn some slang.

“set the website”表达不正确，应改为“access the website”表示“访问网站”。“practice my art English”中“art”多余，应去掉。

× Oh, there aren't any changes on the website, but there are some differences on the content that I browse because you know, the algorithm know me too much.

✓ Oh, there aren't any changes to the websites, but there are some differences in the content that I browse because you know, the algorithm knows me too well.

“changes on the website”应改为“changes to the websites”，表示“对网站的变化”。“differences on the content”应改为“differences in the content”。“algorithm know”主谓不一致，应为“algorithm knows”。“too much”用于程度时应为“too well”。

× These days I prepare my IELTS examination, so all the content is about the speaking contest and so I seldom browse time.

✓ These days I am preparing for my IELTS examination, so all the content is about the speaking contest and so I seldom browse other content.

“I prepare”应使用现在进行时“am preparing”，表示正在进行的动作。“browse time”表达不清，应改为“browse other content”或类似表达。

× Oh, what I want to say is an education website called Juwan.

✓ Oh, what I want to say is an educational website called Juwan.

“education website”应改为“educational website”，形容词形式更合适。

× Many people present their periodical or article of some specific field on it and other people can find some new information on it and to uphold their own per article.

✓ Many people present their periodicals or articles in some specific fields on it, and other people can find some new information on it and update their own articles.

“periodical or article”应使用复数“periodicals or articles”。“article of some specific field”应改为“articles in some specific fields”。“to uphold their own per article”表达不正确，应改为“update their own articles”。