挑战— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more clear and organized. Use correct verb tenses and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, say "When I was young, I found math very hard because I didn't like numbers. However, now I like numbers more, but not very much."

示例: When I was young, I found math very challenging because I didn't like numbers. However, now I like numbers more, although it's still not my favorite subject.

建议: Focus on making your sentences clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, say "Yes, I like challenges because although I am a routine person, I enjoy trying new things like traveling or playing new games."

示例: Yes, I like challenges because although I am a routine person, I enjoy trying new things like traveling or playing new games.

建议: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily. For example, say "No, as I mentioned, I am a person who likes routine. I don't like facing challenges every day; I prefer a calm and predictable life."

示例: No, as I mentioned, I am a person who likes routine. I don't like facing challenges every day; I prefer a calm and predictable life.

建议: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say "I try to stay calm and not get nervous because being nervous can affect my decisions. Therefore, I take a deep breath and think carefully about how to solve the problem."

示例: I try to stay calm and not get nervous because being nervous can affect my decisions. Therefore, I take a deep breath and think carefully about how to solve the problem.

× When I was young I find the mass is so hard for me.

✓ When I was young I found the math was so hard for me.

The sentence talks about a past event, so the verb 'find' should be in the past tense 'found'. Also, 'mass' is likely a typo for 'math'.

× When I was young I find the mass is so hard for me.

✓ When I was young I found math was so hard for me.

In English, we do not use the definite article 'the' before subjects like 'math'. Removing 'the' makes the sentence correct.

× Because the.

✓ Because of that.

The original sentence fragment 'Because the.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'Because of that.' to properly connect the idea.

× I didn't like numbers.

✓ I didn't like numbers.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× At that time.

✓ At that time,

This phrase is a time adverbial and should be connected to the previous or next sentence with a comma for clarity.

× But now I like numbers, but not so much.

✓ But now I like numbers, though not so much.

Using 'though' instead of the second 'but' improves sentence flow and avoids repetition.

× But when I was young, I hit miss.

✓ But when I was young, I was bad at it.

The phrase 'I hit miss' is unclear and ungrammatical. Replacing it with 'I was bad at it' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I like to try and use things and I like a challenge is also I'm our routine person, but I like to sometimes try and use things like traveling or playing a new game.

✓ Yes, I like to try new things and I like a challenge. Also, I'm a routine person, but I sometimes like to try things like traveling or playing a new game.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. Breaking it into clearer sentences and correcting 'our' to 'a' improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I like to try and use things and I like a challenge is also I'm our routine person, but I like to sometimes try and use things like traveling or playing a new game.

✓ Yes, I like to try new things and I like a challenge. Also, I'm a routine person, but I sometimes like to try things like traveling or playing a new game.

The phrase 'I'm our routine person' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm a routine person' to use the correct pronoun and article.

× No, as I mentioned the I am at routined person.

✓ No, as I mentioned, I am a routine person.

The phrase 'the I am at routined person' is incorrect. It should be 'I am a routine person' without 'the' and with correct adjective form.

× No, as I mentioned the I am at routined person.

✓ No, as I mentioned, I am a routine person.

The word 'routined' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'routine'.

× So I don't like to be a. Challenge thing for me everyday I like the boring life.

✓ So I don't like to face challenges every day; I like a boring life.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it with proper structure and word choice improves clarity.

× So I don't like to be a. Challenge thing for me everyday I like the boring life.

✓ So I don't like to face challenges every day; I like a boring life.

'Challenge thing' is incorrect; 'challenges' is the correct plural noun without 'a'. Also, 'the boring life' should be 'a boring life'.

× And I'm not keen to be in this position.

✓ And I'm not keen to be in this position.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I refuse it.

✓ I refuse it.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I try to make myself come and not be a nervous or something like that, because if I am nervous I would not take the best choice for this challenge or this obstacle.

✓ I try to calm myself and not be nervous or something like that, because if I am nervous I would not make the best choice for this challenge or obstacle.

The phrase 'make myself come' is incorrect; it should be 'calm myself'. Also, 'take the best choice' should be 'make the best choice'.

× I try to make myself come and not be a nervous or something like that, because if I am nervous I would not take the best choice for this challenge or this obstacle.

✓ I try to calm myself and not be nervous or something like that, because if I am nervous I would not make the best choice for this challenge or obstacle.

The article 'a' before 'nervous' is incorrect because 'nervous' is an adjective, not a noun.

× So I take it the press and I figure it out how to deal with this problem.

✓ So I take a deep breath and figure out how to deal with this problem.

The phrase 'take it the press' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'take a deep breath' to indicate calming down before solving a problem.