假期— Part 1 评分报告

建议: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام زمن الفعل الصحيح، وكن أكثر دقة في التعبير عن المسافات والأوقات. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

示例: I visited Salalah for my last holiday, which is about 10 hours and 50 minutes away from my house. It was a peaceful environment, and the natural sounds helped us relax and forget daily stress.

建议: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر تنظيماً مع ربط الأفكار بشكل منطقي، واهتم بصياغة الجمل بشكل صحيح لتجنب الأخطاء النحوية.

示例: Of course, I like holidays because sometimes we get stressed and tired from studying and daily university routines. Therefore, students should have holidays to relax, enjoy their hobbies, and spend time with their families.

建议: حاول استخدام زمن الفعل بشكل صحيح وكن أكثر تحديداً في وصف الأنشطة التي قمت بها. استخدم كلمات ربط لتسلسل الأفكار.

示例: The best public holiday was last year when my family and I visited Phuket in Thailand. It was an amazing experience because we tried new activities, learned new words, tasted many types of food, and had a relaxing trip.

建议: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل واستخدام المفردات المناسبة، وكن أكثر وضوحاً في التعبير عن الأفكار. تجنب الأخطاء النحوية وركز على الربط بين الجمل.

示例: Usually, I spend most of my holidays at home relaxing and learning new skills such as nail art or drawing. Moreover, I enjoy cooking and helping my mother, which makes me feel better and more connected with my family.

建议: حاول استخدام تعبيرات أكثر طبيعية وتجنب التكرار. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

示例: I really enjoy spending my day at home because it makes me feel comfortable and happy. Moreover, I can do many things like watching movies and doing various activities that I enjoy.

建议: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل وجعل الأفكار أكثر وضوحاً وترابطاً. استخدم مفردات مناسبة للتعبير عن المشاعر والأسباب.

示例: I prefer a busy holiday because it feels wonderful to spend time with family and friends. Keeping busy during holidays helps me feel refreshed, relaxed, and prevents boredom.

建议: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر تماسكاً وتجنب التكرار. استخدم مفردات متنوعة لوصف تفضيلاتك بشكل أفضل.

示例: I prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy trying new things. It is the best opportunity to create new memories and have unique experiences.

× I visited Salalah which is quite far, 10 hours I think and 50 minute far away from my house.

✓ I visited Salalah which is quite far, 10 hours I think and 50 minutes far away from my house.

The word 'minute' should be plural 'minutes' because it refers to more than one minute. In English, when referring to quantities greater than one, the plural form of the noun is used.

× It help us to relax, peaceful environment and the sound of the natural help us to relax and forget the daily stress.

✓ It helps us to relax; the peaceful environment and the sound of nature help us to relax and forget the daily stress.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' when the subject is singular third person ('It'). Also, 'the natural' is incorrect; it should be 'nature'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and proper noun usage.

× Of course I like holiday because sometime we are come stressed, tired from the studying and doing the daily routine in the university.

✓ Of course I like holidays because sometimes we become stressed and tired from studying and doing the daily routine at the university.

'Holiday' should be plural 'holidays' to refer generally. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb. 'Are come' is incorrect; 'become' is the correct verb. 'Studying' does not need 'the'. Preposition 'at' is used with 'university' for location.

× So the student should be have a holiday to relax, intervals, their hobbies, sitting with their family.

✓ So students should have a holiday to relax, enjoy intervals, pursue their hobbies, and sit with their family.

'Should be have' is incorrect; it should be 'should have'. 'Intervals' needs a verb like 'enjoy'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct modal verb usage.

× The best public holiday was last year, me and my family visited Phuket in Thailand and it was amazing experience for us.

✓ The best public holiday was last year; my family and I visited Phuket in Thailand, and it was an amazing experience for us.

'Me and my family' should be 'my family and I' as the subject. 'Amazing experience' needs the article 'an'. The sentence is corrected for past tense and proper subject usage.

× We tried a new activities, learned new words, trying many tests of food and it was relaxing trip.

✓ We tried new activities, learned new words, tried many types of food, and it was a relaxing trip.

'A new activities' is incorrect; 'activities' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Trying' should be 'tried' to maintain past tense. 'Tests of food' is incorrect; 'types of food' is appropriate.

× Usually I spend most of my holiday at home relaxing and learning and new skills such as nail artist or drawing.

✓ Usually I spend most of my holiday at home relaxing and learning new skills such as nail art or drawing.

'Learning and new skills' is incorrect; 'learning new skills' is correct. 'Nail artist' should be 'nail art' as a skill. The sentence is corrected for proper present tense and noun usage.

× Moreover, I like cooking and I help my mother and that make me feel more better and response also connect with my.

✓ Moreover, I like cooking and I help my mother, and that makes me feel better and also helps me connect with her.

'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that'. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone is correct. 'Response also connect with my' is unclear; corrected to 'also helps me connect with her'.

× I really enjoy spending my day at home because it gives me comfortable feeling and wonderful feeling.

✓ I really enjoy spending my days at home because it gives me a comfortable and wonderful feeling.

'My day' should be plural 'my days' to indicate habitual action. 'Comfortable feeling and wonderful feeling' is repetitive; combined with 'a comfortable and wonderful feeling'.

× Moreover, I can do a lot of things such as watching movie, doing anything that I can do it at home.

✓ Moreover, I can do a lot of things such as watching movies and doing anything that I can do at home.

'Watching movie' should be 'watching movies' (plural). 'Do it' is redundant after 'doing anything'; removed for clarity.

× I prefer a busy holiday because it is wonderful feeling if you are. Make moments with your family, your friends and make your old days busy so you can feel more refresh, more relax and feeling good without boring.

✓ I prefer a busy holiday because it is a wonderful feeling. You make moments with your family and friends, and keep your days busy so you can feel more refreshed, more relaxed, and not bored.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Corrected for sentence completeness, proper adjective forms ('refreshed', 'relaxed'), and clarity.

× I prefer exciting holiday because I am an person who like trying a new thing and it is the best moment to make a new moment with a new experience.

✓ I prefer an exciting holiday because I am a person who likes trying new things, and it is the best time to create new experiences.

'An person' should be 'a person'. 'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject. 'A new thing' and 'a new moment' are awkward; replaced with plural forms and clearer expressions.

× Moreover, I like trying new things.

✓ Moreover, I like trying new things.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.