植物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。"glow prawns"は意味が通じず、"especially I keep strawberries"も不自然です。文を簡潔にし、正しい単語を使い、文法を整えることが必要です。

示例: Yes, I grow plants in my garden, especially strawberries, which I often use for breakfast.

建议: 時制の誤りがあります。"have kept"は現在完了形で、過去の特定の時点を表す場合は過去形"kept"を使うべきです。また、文をもう少し自然にするために、簡潔に答えましょう。

示例: When I was young, I grew watermelons and melons in my garden.

建议: "grow up plants"は不自然な表現です。"grow plants"が正しいです。また、"which affect when we grow plants"の部分も意味が曖昧なので、具体的に説明すると良いです。

示例: I know that factors like water and temperature affect how plants grow.

建议: "No, they aren't"は質問に対する適切な返答ではありません。"They prefer to get as a gift some fruits or products or plants rather than normal plants"も意味が曖昧で混乱を招きます。明確で簡潔な答えを心がけましょう。

示例: No, Chinese people usually do not send plants as gifts. They prefer giving fruits or other products instead.

× Yes, I glow prawns in my garden especially I keep strawberries and I also use it breakfast.

✓ Yes, I grow prawns in my garden, especially I keep strawberries, and I also use them for breakfast.

The verb 'glow' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'grow' when talking about cultivating plants or animals. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to strawberries (plural), and 'use it breakfast' should be 'use them for breakfast' to be grammatically correct.

× When I was young, I have kept watermelon and melon in my garden.

✓ When I was young, I kept watermelon and melon in my garden.

The sentence uses present perfect tense 'have kept' incorrectly with a past time expression 'When I was young'. The simple past tense 'kept' should be used to match the past time reference.

× I know some factors which affect when we grow up plants, for example water and temperature.

✓ I know some factors that affect plant growth, for example, water and temperature.

The phrase 'which affect when we grow up plants' is awkward and incorrect. 'That affect plant growth' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'grow up plants' is not a correct phrase; 'plant growth' is appropriate.

× No, they aren't. They prefer to get as a gift some fruits or products or plants rather than normal plants.

✓ No, they don't. They prefer to receive fruits, products, or plants as gifts rather than normal plants.

The response 'No, they aren't' is incorrect because the question is about whether Chinese people send plants as gifts, so 'No, they don't' is appropriate. Also, 'get as a gift some fruits or products or plants' is awkward; 'prefer to receive fruits, products, or plants as gifts' is clearer. The phrase 'rather than normal plants' is contradictory and unclear; it is better to omit or clarify.