颜色— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use correct prepositions and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by combining sentences effectively.

示例: My favorite colour is black because it suits my personality and I often wear it. Moreover, I always receive compliments when I wear black, which makes me like it even more.

建议: The answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with proper sentence structure and provide specific reasons using linking words.

示例: I dislike the colour green because it is too dark for my eyes, and I find it uncomfortable to look at for a long time.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and off-topic. Make sure to answer the question directly and provide complete sentences with supporting details. Avoid mixing up subjects like friends and parents.

示例: I am not sure about my friends' favourite colours, but I know that many of them like blue because it is calming and pleasant.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to explain your feelings clearly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: I don't like having green colour in my room because it makes me feel distracted and uneasy. Additionally, the brightness of the colour is too strong for me, so I am not comfortable with it.

× It suits on my personality.

✓ It suits my personality.

The verb 'suit' does not require the preposition 'on'. The correct usage is 'suit' followed directly by the object. Hence, 'It suits my personality' is correct.

× it's never put on my eyes so I dislike it.

✓ it's never put near my eyes so I dislike it.

The phrase 'put on my eyes' is incorrect because you cannot 'put' a color on your eyes. The intended meaning is likely that the color is not suitable or pleasing to the eyes. Using 'near my eyes' or 'close to my eyes' is more appropriate.

× I don't remember but I think my parents favorite color is black because.

✓ I don't remember, but I think my parents' favorite color is black.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper punctuation. Also, 'parents' is possessive and should have an apostrophe. The word 'because' is left hanging without a reason following it, so it should be removed or completed.

× it makes me feel district and uneasy.

✓ it makes me feel distracted and uneasy.

The word 'district' is incorrect in this context. The correct adjective is 'distracted', which means unable to concentrate. 'District' is a noun meaning an area or region.

× When I started the color feed me too bright so I don't comfort with this color.

✓ When I started, the color felt too bright, so I am not comfortable with this color.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'feed me' is incorrect; it should be 'felt'. 'Comfort' is a noun or verb, but here 'comfortable' (adjective) is needed. Also, 'don't comfort with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not comfortable with'. Proper punctuation and verb forms are necessary.