颜色— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In your answer, try to use correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement, for example, 'reminds' instead of 'remind' and 'makes' instead of 'make'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky, which makes me feel calm and peaceful. For example, I often use blue when painting, so it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable.

建议: Try to use correct grammar such as 'reminds' instead of 'remind' and 'colors' in plural when appropriate. Also, avoid short incomplete sentences like 'For example.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer more coherent. Try to be more specific about why you dislike brown and how bright colors affect you.

示例: I dislike the color brown because it reminds me of dirty mud and looks old. I prefer bright colors because they make me feel calm and cheerful, so they create a more positive atmosphere for me.

建议: Make sure to use correct subject-verb agreement, for example, 'my friends definitely like' instead of 'my friend is definitely like'. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'more beautifully because'. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I think my friends definitely like bright colors such as blue, yellow, and red because they often use these colors when drawing to make their pictures more colorful and attractive.

建议: Use correct verb forms like 'makes' instead of 'make' and avoid informal phrases like 'So yeah'. Try to connect your ideas with linking words such as 'because' and 'so'. Also, clarify your last point about 'cannot stay organized' to make it more understandable.

示例: Black is a color that makes me feel uncomfortable in my room, especially when I turn off the light. Because I cannot see clearly, I feel scared and uneasy, so I find it hard to relax or stay calm at that time.

× My favorite color is blue because it remind me of the sky, which make me feel calm and peaceful.

✓ My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky, which makes me feel calm and peaceful.

The verbs 'remind' and 'make' need to agree with the singular subject 'it'. In English, for third person singular subjects, verbs usually add an 's' at the end in the present tense. So 'remind' should be 'reminds' and 'make' should be 'makes'.

× This color make me feel comfortable and relaxed when I use it.

✓ This color makes me feel comfortable and relaxed when I use it.

The verb 'make' must agree with the singular subject 'color'. For third person singular subjects, the verb should be 'makes' in the present tense.

× I dislike the color brown because it is like the old color and it is not bright as the other color.

✓ I dislike the color brown because it is like an old color and it is not as bright as the other colors.

The phrase 'not bright as' is incorrect; it should be 'not as bright as' to make a proper comparison. Also, 'the old color' should be 'an old color' because it is a general statement. Additionally, 'the other color' should be plural 'other colors' to match the context.

× Every time when I use it, it remind me of The Dirty things of muddy or something like that.

✓ Every time when I use it, it reminds me of dirty things like mud or something like that.

The verb 'remind' must be 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'The Dirty things of muddy' is awkward; 'dirty things like mud' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Bright color tend to create more positive atmosphere on me.

✓ Bright colors tend to create a more positive atmosphere for me.

'Bright color' should be plural 'bright colors' because it refers to colors in general. 'Tend' must agree with plural subject 'colors'. Also, 'more positive atmosphere' needs the article 'a' before it, and 'on me' should be 'for me' to express the effect properly.

× I think my friend is definitely like the bright color such as blue, yellow and red because every time they draw or paint something, they use that color on their picture for making their eyes more colorful and beautifully so.

✓ I think my friends definitely like bright colors such as blue, yellow, and red because every time they draw or paint something, they use those colors in their pictures to make them more colorful and beautiful.

'My friend is' should be 'my friends are' to match the plural pronoun 'they'. 'Bright color' should be plural 'bright colors'. 'That color' should be 'those colors' to refer to multiple colors. 'On their picture' should be 'in their pictures'. 'For making their eyes more colorful and beautifully so' is awkward; 'to make them more colorful and beautiful' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yeah, more beautifully because.

✓ Yeah, more beautifully because...

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or object. It should be completed or connected to the previous sentence for clarity.

× I would say black is a color which makes me feel uncomfortable in my room especially when I turn off the light.

✓ I would say black is a color that makes me feel uncomfortable in my room, especially when I turn off the light.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in defining clauses. Also, a comma is needed before 'especially' to separate the clauses.

× I say that because when I turn off the light it make me scared of something because I cannot see everything clearly.

✓ I say that because when I turn off the light, it makes me scared of something because I cannot see everything clearly.

The verb 'make' must be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, a comma is needed after 'light' to separate clauses.

× So yeah it's made me feel uncomfortable and cannot stay organized with that time.

✓ So yeah, it makes me feel uncomfortable and I cannot stay organized at that time.

'It's made me' is past tense, but the context suggests present tense 'it makes me'. Also, 'cannot stay organized with that time' is awkward; 'I cannot stay organized at that time' is clearer. A comma is needed after 'So yeah'.