颜色— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'my warm' và chú ý ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và tránh lặp từ.

示例: My favorite colour is pink because it is bright and cheerful. In fact, everything in my bedroom is pink, including my chair, table, and bed. Looking at pink makes me feel happy and delighted, so I love this colour the most.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi và tránh nói những điều không liên quan như 'Tekla is an icon of blue'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: I dislike the colour black because it makes me feel tired and unmotivated. Whenever I see black, I feel a bit exhausted and it affects my mood negatively. Therefore, black is not my favourite colour.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng.

示例: From my conversations with my friends, I know that they also like pink a lot. Like me, they think pink is a lovely colour and often wear pink clothes, which makes them look very cute.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh những câu không cần thiết và chú ý ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời logic và tự nhiên hơn, đồng thời tránh những nhận định có thể gây hiểu nhầm như 'it's a color for boys'.

示例: I feel uncomfortable with the colour blue in my room because it doesn't match the pink furniture I have. Also, I think blue is less suitable for my style, so I prefer to avoid it in my room.

× For instance my chair, my table, my bed and even my warm is when I look at pink color is make me feel enjoyable and delighted so I love that color most.

✓ For instance, my chair, my table, my bed, and even my wardrobe are pink. When I look at the pink color, it makes me feel happy and delighted, so I love that color the most.

The original sentence has several issues: 'my warm' is likely a typo for 'my wardrobe'; 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject; 'is make' is incorrect verb form and should be 'it makes'; 'enjoyable' is an adjective that doesn't fit here, 'happy' or 'delighted' is better. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Like me, they they suppose that pink or really lovely and they wear pink clothes every day and it makes they really cute.

✓ Like me, they suppose that pink is really lovely and they wear pink clothes every day, which makes them really cute.

The sentence has repeated 'they'; 'or' should be 'is'; 'it makes they' is incorrect pronoun usage, should be 'it makes them'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs commas for clarity.

× From my perspective, it is blue because it's not suitable in my room, which are decorative by a lot of pink furnitures.

✓ From my perspective, it is blue because it's not suitable for my room, which is decorated with a lot of pink furniture.

The phrase 'suitable in my room' should be 'suitable for my room'; 'which are decorative' is incorrect, should be 'which is decorated'; 'furnitures' is incorrect plural, 'furniture' is uncountable and does not take 's'.

× which are decorative by a lot of pink furnitures.

✓ which is decorated with a lot of pink furniture.

The subject 'which' refers to 'my room' (singular), so the verb should be singular 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'furnitures' is incorrect plural; 'furniture' is uncountable and should not have 's'.