礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并且直接回答问题。

示例: No, I'm not very good at choosing gifts for my friends. Instead, I usually send them custom-made digital emojis to express my feelings.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明送礼时间和原因。

示例: I usually send self-made emojis to my friends and family on their birthdays because I think birthdays are special occasions worth celebrating.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确。建议注意语法结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: When choosing a gift, I consider my budget and the preferences of the receiver. Therefore, I usually send customized emojis that are affordable for me.

建议: 回答中有很多语法错误和拼写错误，句子结构混乱，难以理解。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇和语法，清楚表达意思。

示例: Yes, I once gave my grandfather a handmade fishing lure because we both enjoy fishing. I learned to make it from him, and he appreciated the gift very much.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接表达观点并给出理由。

示例: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. They can cause stress for both me and my friends because of the cost.

× No, I'm not really good at choosing give to for my friends.

✓ No, I'm not really good at choosing gifts for my friends.

这里“choosing give to for my friends”中的“give to”用法错误，应该用名词“gifts”来表示“礼物”，并且“for my friends”是正确的介词短语。建议用“choosing gifts for my friends”。

× I usually drolla digital the emojis as gifted to send messages to my friends and their families which are represented my personal interest in doing hence our relation.

✓ I usually send digital emojis as gifts to send messages to my friends and their families, which represent my personal interests and our relationship.

句子中“drolla digital the emojis as gifted to send messages”结构混乱，动词使用错误，应使用“send digital emojis as gifts”。“which are represented my personal interest in doing hence our relation”语法错误，改为“which represent my personal interests and our relationship”更通顺。

× Are usually send self-made emojis to my friends and families when their birthdays because I think a birthday is a special day to celebrate and I self-made the emojis are usually interesting and.

✓ I usually send self-made emojis to my friends and family on their birthdays because I think a birthday is a special day to celebrate, and the self-made emojis are usually interesting.

句子开头“Are usually send”主语缺失，应为“I usually send”。“friends and families”应为“friends and family”，family作为集合名词。介词“when their birthdays”应为“on their birthdays”。句子末尾不完整，补充完整。

× I would consider the budget of myself when choosing a gift, but I also will consider the preference of the receivers.

✓ I would consider my own budget when choosing a gift, but I will also consider the preferences of the receivers.

“the budget of myself”表达不自然，应改为“my own budget”。“the preference of the receivers”应为复数“preferences”，因为接收者可能有多种偏好。

× So I usually send customized the emojis from messages that which is under my budget.

✓ So I usually send customized emojis through messages that are within my budget.

“customized the emojis”中“the”多余，应去掉。介词“from messages”不合适，改为“through messages”。“that which is under my budget”结构错误，应为“that are within my budget”。

× Yes I have us send a handmade alu efficient to my Gran father because fishing is shared The Hobbit over me and my Gran father and I also learned how to make the handmade lures from him and he received the gift away.

✓ Yes, I have sent a handmade lure to my grandfather because fishing is a shared hobby between me and my grandfather, and I also learned how to make handmade lures from him. He accepted the gift happily.

“have us send”错误，应为“have sent”。“alu efficient”应为“lure”。“Gran father”拼写错误，应为“grandfather”。“fishing is shared The Hobbit over me and my Gran father”语法混乱，改为“fishing is a shared hobby between me and my grandfather”。“he received the gift away”表达不自然，改为“he accepted the gift happily”。

× No, I don't think that expensive, but gives the word express my feeling stronger because expensive gives gives me stress if for my budget and my friends will be stressed to receive the expensive gives it like a thing singers.

✓ No, I don't think that expensive gifts express my feelings better because expensive gifts cause me stress due to my budget, and my friends would also feel stressed to receive expensive gifts, as if they were burdens.

句子中“expensive, but gives the word express my feeling stronger”结构错误，应为“expensive gifts express my feelings better”。“gives gives me stress if for my budget”重复且错误，应为“cause me stress due to my budget”。“expensive gives it like a thing singers”表达不清，改为“as if they were burdens”。