礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve fluency and grammar by avoiding filler words and correcting singular/plural forms. Use clearer, more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I am good at giving gifts because I choose meaningful presents for my close friends."

示例: Yes, I am good at giving gifts because my circle of friends is small, so I can choose meaningful presents for them rather than giving gifts just for formality.

建议: Clarify and organize your answer with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. For example, "I usually give gifts on birthdays, weddings, and other special occasions because gifts help express how important these people are in my life."

示例: I usually give gifts on birthdays, weddings, and other celebrations because they are a way to show how much I value those people in my life.

建议: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Use linking words to explain your reasoning. For example, "When choosing a gift, I consider the recipient and the occasion. For instance, for a housewarming, I choose gifts related to the home."

示例: When I choose a gift, I think about who will receive it and the occasion. For example, for a housewarming party, I usually give something useful for the home.

建议: Use past tense correctly and avoid filler words. Make sentences concise and clear. For example, "When I was a child, I often made handmade cards for my siblings' birthdays, which they really appreciated."

示例: When I was a child, I often made handmade cards for my brothers and sisters on their birthdays, and they were very impressed.

建议: Avoid repetition and filler words. Express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. For example, "No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. Gifts are symbols of love, and the thought behind them matters more than the price."

示例: No, I don't believe expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters is the thought and love behind the gift, not its cost.

× Yes, I am good at giving gift.

✓ Yes, I am good at giving gifts.

The noun 'gift' should be plural 'gifts' because it refers to the general act of giving multiple gifts, not just one.

× So I give the gift, uh, limited people.

✓ So I give gifts to a limited number of people.

The phrase 'the gift' is incorrect here; it should be plural 'gifts' and 'limited people' is unclear, so 'a limited number of people' is more appropriate.

× But uh, I give the gift not only for the formalty sake, I uh, give them release realistic gift.

✓ But I give gifts not only for formality's sake, I also give them really realistic gifts.

The word 'formalty' is misspelled and should be 'formality'. 'Release realistic' is incorrect; it should be 'really realistic'. Also, 'gift' should be plural 'gifts'.

× I usually give to others on their birthday, marriage and verses and other celebrations of life and it's the only mean to deter, to describe our feelings, uh, how they important in our life.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on their birthdays, marriages, anniversaries, and other celebrations of life, and it's the only means to express our feelings about how important they are in our lives.

Several plural nouns are needed: 'birthdays', 'marriages', 'anniversaries'. 'Mean' should be 'means'. 'Deter' is incorrect; 'describe' or 'express' is better. 'How they important' should be 'how important they are'.

× I consider a lot of things when I choosing a gift, like the aids and purpose to whom I give the gift.

✓ I consider a lot of things when I choose a gift, like the needs and purpose of the person to whom I give the gift.

The verb 'choosing' should be in base form 'choose' after 'when I'. 'Aids' is incorrect; 'needs' fits better. 'To whom I give the gift' is correct but 'of the person' clarifies meaning.

× For example, if I give the gift on the occasion of opening house, I give the gift of related to house item.

✓ For example, if I give a gift on the occasion of a housewarming, I give a gift related to house items.

'The gift' should be 'a gift' as it is a general statement. 'Opening house' is incorrect; 'housewarming' is the correct term. 'Related to house item' should be 'related to house items'.

× When I was a kid, I had given others a handmade gifts and like, uh, on the birthday of my brothers and sisters, I often give the handmaid card which uh, which was very impressed them.

✓ When I was a kid, I gave others handmade gifts, and on the birthdays of my brothers and sisters, I often gave handmade cards which impressed them a lot.

'Had given' is past perfect but simple past 'gave' is better here. 'A handmade gifts' is incorrect; 'handmade gifts' is plural without 'a'. 'Handmaid' is misspelled; should be 'handmade'. 'Was very impressed them' is incorrect; 'impressed them a lot' is correct.

× No, I don't think so. Uh, gifts give expensive gifts. Better express our feelings. Uh, gifts only the symbol of love. We can only express our feeling by gifts. Uh, it's no matter about the cost.

✓ No, I don't think so. Expensive gifts do not better express our feelings. Gifts are only a symbol of love. We can only express our feelings through gifts. It doesn't matter about the cost.

The original sentences have incorrect word order and missing verbs. 'Gifts give expensive gifts' is incorrect; it should be 'Expensive gifts do not better express'. 'Gifts only the symbol' needs verb 'are'. 'Our feeling' should be plural 'our feelings'. 'No matter about the cost' should be 'It doesn't matter about the cost'.