礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + short reason), then give one specific supporting detail with a linking phrase. Avoid grammar mistakes (use 'people', correct tense and subject-verb agreement) and finish the sentence with a complete idea.

示例: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts because I pay attention to what the person likes. For example, when someone loves reading, I usually choose a recent novel or a book by their favourite author to make the gift personal.

建议: Answer directly and add one or two specific occasions with reasons. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'especially' and avoid unfinished sentences. Correct word choice (people, make memories) and keep within 3–4 sentences.

示例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, especially birthdays, weddings and anniversaries. For example, I often buy a personalised gift for a close friend on their birthday to help make the day memorable.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence stating main considerations, then list 2–3 specific factors with brief explanations using linking words ('first', 'also'). Fix grammar (remove extra words, use plural correctly) and finish examples fully.

示例: I consider the recipient's age, interests and personality when choosing a gift. First, age matters because a baby needs safe toys, and also I check interests — for instance, a music lover might appreciate concert tickets.

建议: Answer directly (yes/no/preference) and explain briefly why. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing: 'I don't have much time' not 'I have not much time'. Give one concrete example if possible and keep sentences complete.

示例: I usually buy gifts rather than make them because I am not very skilled at crafts and I don't have much free time. Once, though, I made a simple photo frame for my sister, and she really appreciated the personal touch.

建议: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence, then support it with one or two concise reasons and a short example. Improve grammar ('I don't believe that', 'it doesn't matter') and avoid repetitive phrasing.

示例: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters is thoughtfulness — a small, well-chosen present can show you understand the person's tastes, for example a handmade card or a meaningful memento.

× Peoples who are nearest to me, they can answer appropriately.

✓ People who are nearest to me can answer appropriately.

'Peoples' is incorrect when referring to a group of people; the correct plural is 'people'. Also remove the redundant subject 'they' after the comma; combine into one clause. Suggestion: use 'people' and write a single clause without repeating the subject.

× I love to gift someone and when I pick the gift, I always try to keep in mind the preferable gift for them.

✓ I love giving gifts, and when I pick a gift I always try to keep in mind their preferences.

Use the verb 'give' or gerund 'giving' instead of 'to gift someone' for natural English. 'Preferable gift for them' is awkward; use 'their preferences'. Also remove unnecessary commas. Suggestion: use 'giving gifts' and 'their preferences' for clarity.

× For an example, the person who love to read, I always try to.

✓ For example, if a person loves to read, I always try to choose a book.

'For an example' should be 'For example'. Subject-verb agreement error ('person who love' should be 'person who loves'). The sentence is incomplete; add the object 'choose a book' to complete the idea. Suggestion: make conditional 'if' clause and complete the action.

× I usually gift my nearest peoples in any occasions like marriage, anniversary, birthday or any other achievement.

✓ I usually give gifts to my nearest people on occasions like weddings, anniversaries, birthdays, or other achievements.

Replace 'gift' as verb with 'give gifts' or 'give' and use 'people' not 'peoples'. 'Any occasions' should be 'on occasions' and pluralize event nouns: 'weddings, anniversaries, birthdays'. Suggestion: use 'give gifts to my nearest people on occasions such as...'.

× In fact, I try to keep the memory in remarkable and I think.

✓ In fact, I try to make the memories remarkable.

'Keep the memory in remarkable' is ungrammatical and wordy. Simplify to 'make the memories remarkable'. Remove the trailing 'and I think' which is incomplete. Suggestion: use clear verb-object structure 'make the memories remarkable'.

× When I want to buy anything, then I my first consideration will be the age, the characteristics and the gender of the persons whom I want to give.

✓ When I want to buy something, my first considerations are the age, characteristics, and gender of the people I want to give it to.

Remove extra 'then' and incorrect word order 'I my'. Use 'something' not 'anything' for specific intent. 'Persons whom I want to give' is awkward; use 'people I want to give it to' and place the preposition at end for natural speech. Make 'consideration' plural 'considerations'. Suggestion: reorder and use natural prepositional placement.

× For an example, when I give a baby, then I have to choose that's.

✓ For example, when I buy a gift for a baby, I have to choose age-appropriate items.

'For an example' should be 'For example'. 'When I give a baby' is incomplete and incorrect—should be 'buy a gift for a baby'. 'I have to choose that's' is ungrammatical; replace with 'age-appropriate items' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: specify buying a gift and what you choose.

× I prefer to buy some things for a gift purpose instead of making by hand.

✓ I prefer to buy things as gifts instead of making them by hand.

Use 'as gifts' rather than 'for a gift purpose' and include the object 'them' after 'making' to complete the clause. Suggestion: 'prefer to buy things as gifts instead of making them by hand'.

× I believe that I'm not very good at crafting or making things by hand.

✓ I believe that I'm not very good at crafting or making things by hand.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (Included to indicate no applicable error from the provided list.)

× However, I have not much time when I made some things at my hand.

✓ However, I do not have much time to make things by hand.

Use 'do not have' for present lack of time. 'When I made' should be 'to make' to express purpose/ability. 'At my hand' is incorrect; use 'by hand'. Suggestion: 'I do not have much time to make things by hand.'

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

Question is acceptable as written; no grammatical change needed. (Included to indicate no applicable error from the provided list.)

× Actually not.

✓ Not really.

'Actually not' is understandable but informal and abrupt. 'Not really' is a more natural spoken response. Suggestion: use 'Not really' in conversation.

× I don't believe like that gift is a gift, whatever it's expensive or not.

✓ I don't believe that a gift is defined by how expensive it is.

Original has awkward clause order and article misuse. Use 'that a gift is defined by how expensive it is' to clearly express the idea. Suggestion: rephrase to 'I don't believe that a gift is defined by how expensive it is.'

× When I want to gift someone, at my heart I think this is more valuable, but how much is expensive?

✓ When I want to give someone a gift, at heart I think what matters is its value, not the price.

Use 'give someone a gift' rather than 'gift someone'. 'At my heart' is unnatural; use 'at heart'. Rephrase 'this is more valuable, but how much is expensive?' to 'what matters is its value, not the price.' Suggestion: focus on clarity and natural phrasing.

× It's doesn't matter.

✓ It doesn't matter.

Incorrect contraction 'It's doesn't' combines 'it is' and 'does not'; use 'It doesn't' or 'It does not matter.' Suggestion: use 'It doesn't matter.'