礼物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Not really” or “I’m not very good at giving gifts”), then give 1–2 brief reasons using simple linking words like because or since. Avoid redundant phrasing and keep sentences short and natural.

示例: Not really. I’m not very good at giving gifts because people from different cultures have different customs, and I worry about choosing something inappropriate. For example, I once avoided giving flowers to a friend because I wasn’t sure if they were suitable, so now I prefer to ask first.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples using linking words (for example, such as, or like). Correct grammar: use plural/singular and possessives (my birthday, my friend's birthday). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I usually give gifts on special occasions. For example, I give presents for my birthday and my friends’ birthdays, and sometimes I give small gifts for holidays like New Year.

建议: Clarify the main idea: say what you consider (e.g. the recipient’s taste or usefulness). Use simple vocabulary correctly and give a concrete example. Use one linking phrase such as because or for example to connect ideas.

示例: I think about the recipient’s preferences and needs when choosing a gift. For example, if my friend likes makeup, I will choose a lipstick or eyeshadow set because I know she uses those products every day.

建议: Answer directly then explain briefly with 1–2 reasons using linking words like because or so. Fix pronouns and word order (e.g. I don’t give handmade gifts; they are time-consuming). Keep it concise and natural.

示例: No, I don’t usually give handmade gifts because I’m not very good at crafts and making things takes a lot of time. I worry the result might look untidy, so I prefer buying a ready-made present.

建议: Give a clear opinion first (yes or no), then support it with a reason and a brief example. Use correct pronouns and smoother phrases like “I would feel pressured” or “it would put me under financial pressure.” Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: No, I don’t think expensive gifts express feelings any better. I would feel pressured to match the cost and that could be stressful or expensive, so I prefer thoughtful but affordable presents.

× I'm not think so because in different country have different culture so I'm not very understand of every country their culture.

✓ I don't think so because different countries have different cultures, so I don't really understand every country's culture.

The original sentence mixes incorrect verb forms and noun forms. 'I'm not think' is wrong; use 'I don't think' for present simple. 'In different country have different culture' needs plural nouns and correct word order: 'different countries have different cultures'. 'I'm not very understand' should be 'I don't really understand'. Use 'every country's culture' to show possession. Improve clarity by using commas to separate clauses.

× So I'm not good at going giving gifts.

✓ So I'm not good at giving gifts.

The phrase 'going giving' is ungrammatical; only 'giving gifts' is needed. 'Good at' should be followed by a gerund verb form ('giving'). Remove the extra verb 'going'.

× I usually give gift when they have a special day, for example my birth my friend birthday and I will give a gift to her.

✓ I usually give gifts when they have a special day; for example, my friend's birthday, and I will give her a gift.

Use plural 'gifts' for general habits. 'My birth my friend birthday' is unclear; correct to 'my friend's birthday'. Use possessive for 'my friend' and correct word order. Also 'give a gift to her' is better as 'give her a gift' for natural English.

× I usually give gift when they have a special day, for example my birth my friend birthday and I will give a gift to her.

✓ I usually give gifts when they have a special day; for example, my friend's birthday, and I will give her a gift.

Pronoun use: 'they' is vague—if referring to people in general, 'they' can be okay, but ensure consistency. 'I will give a gift to her' uses object pronoun awkwardly; English prefers 'give her a gift'. Using 'my friend's birthday' requires possessive form.

× I like to consider the utterance because I like other lighting by myself. So I will consider the utterly thing. For example, I like to give like makeup or.

✓ I like to consider the recipient's preferences because I prefer to choose things by myself. So I consider the recipient's tastes. For example, I like to give makeup.

Original uses incorrect words ('utterance', 'utterly', 'lighting') that don't fit context. 'Consider the recipient's preferences' is the intended meaning. Remove filler 'like' and incomplete 'or.' Ensure sentences are complete and use appropriate nouns (recipient, preferences, makeup).

× No I usually don't give him my gifts because I find them quite complicated and I'm not very good at craft so I also think making something by hand would be time consuming and might end up looking you tidy so I.

✓ No. I usually don't give handmade gifts because I find crafts quite complicated and I'm not very good at them. I also think making something by hand would be time-consuming and might end up looking untidy.

Pronoun errors: 'give him my gifts' is unclear—likely meant 'handmade gifts'; 'I'm not very good at craft' should be 'at crafts' or 'them'. 'Looking you tidy' is incorrect; correct is 'looking untidy'. Also fix punctuation and sentence fragments to form complete sentences.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This question is grammatically acceptable as written; no correction needed. It correctly uses 'do' to form a question and 'better express' to compare. No modal verb error present.

× I will feel pressure because if my friend or give me the expensive gifts and when their birthdays come I think I need to give they the same price thing. I think it's consuming my money.

✓ I would feel pressured because if a friend gives me an expensive gift, when their birthday comes I would feel I need to give them a gift of the same value. I think it would be costly for me.

Original has conditional and pronoun errors and awkward phrasing. Use 'would' for hypothetical feelings. 'If my friend or give me' is incorrect; use 'if a friend gives me'. 'Give they the same price thing' should be 'give them a gift of the same value'. 'It's consuming my money' is unnatural; use 'it would be costly' or 'it would cost me a lot'.