历史— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

示例: Yes, I have studied history both globally and about my own country, Thailand. When I was young, my school provided us with history cards that helped me learn important events from around the world as well as Thai history.

建议: Your answer needs clearer structure and more specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences. Also, specify when and how you listen to podcasts for learning history.

示例: I used to learn history in the classroom when I was young. However, nowadays I prefer listening to history podcasts because they provide detailed information and I can enjoy them during my free time.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas in full sentences with proper grammar. Provide specific examples and use linking words to explain the pros and cons clearly.

示例: Learning history helps us understand both the positive and negative outcomes of past events. For example, wars may bring victory to some countries but also cause suffering and loss to others.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain why history is important, including learning from past mistakes and successes.

示例: Yes, I believe learning history is important because it allows us to learn from past mistakes and avoid repeating them. Additionally, we can apply the positive lessons from history to improve our future.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I have.

The question 'Have you ever studied any history?' requires a present perfect tense response. 'Yes I do' is present simple and does not correctly answer the question. Using 'Yes, I have' correctly matches the tense and meaning.

× the school provide us the history cards in the global and my own country Thailand.

✓ the school provides us with history cards about the world and my own country, Thailand.

The subject 'school' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' (third person singular). Also, 'in the global' is incorrect; it should be 'about the world'. Adding 'with' after 'provides' is necessary for correct preposition use.

× So I learn both globally and our country history.

✓ So I learn both global and our country's history.

'Globally' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'global' is needed to modify 'history'. Also, 'our country history' should be 'our country's history' to show possession.

× I learned the history in the classroom when I was young, but right now there are a lot of information about history.

✓ I learned history in the classroom when I was young, but right now there is a lot of information about history.

'Information' is uncountable and singular, so 'there is' should be used instead of 'there are'. Also, 'the history' is unnecessary; 'history' alone is correct.

× One of the resource that I love is the podcast I enjoy listening during.

✓ One of the resources that I love is podcasts I enjoy listening to.

'Resource' should be plural 'resources' because of 'one of the'. Also, 'podcast' should be plural or rephrased. The phrase 'listening during' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to'.

× The benefits of learning history is you going to know what's either pros and cons example the war in the past have the pros for some the country that victory but is have a cons for.

✓ The benefits of learning history are that you get to know the pros and cons. For example, wars in the past had pros for some countries that won but also had cons.

'Benefits' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be simplified. 'Have the pros' should be 'had pros', and 'is have a cons' is incorrect; it should be 'also had cons'.

× Yes, the good point of learning history is you can learn from your past and you can avoid the mistake and you can't use the good part of the history.

✓ Yes, a good point of learning history is that you can learn from your past, avoid mistakes, and use the good parts of history.

'The good point' should be 'a good point' as it is one of many. 'You can't use the good part' is incorrect; it should be 'you can use the good parts'. Also, 'the mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' and the sentence needs better conjunctions for clarity.