金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语句不够流畅，有重复且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且直接回答问题后用一两句具体细节支持。

示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because my parents give me some money at the beginning of each year. I always plan my expenses carefully to avoid borrowing, as I believe it is not a good habit.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: I don't think I have ever lent money to others because my friends are also students who usually get money from their parents. Therefore, they rarely need to borrow money from me.

× I need to I need to make a plan about how to use this money.

✓ I need to make a plan about how to use this money.

句子中重复了“I need to”，属于动词现在分词形式使用错误，导致句子冗余。应删除重复部分，使句子简洁通顺。

× So I don't really borrow money to my my parents or others because I don't think is a good habit.

✓ So I don't really borrow money from my parents or others because I don't think it is a good habit.

动词borrow后应接介词from表示“从……借”，而不是to。且句中缺少主语it，导致句子不完整。应改为“borrow money from my parents”并补充主语。

× So they don't really need to lend money that they don't really need to borrow money from me.

✓ So they don't really need to borrow money and they don't really need to borrow money from me.

句中“lend money that”结构不正确，且语义重复。应改为“borrow money and they don't really need to borrow money from me”以表达正确意思。

× Because they can borrow money from ask for money from their parents.

✓ Because they can borrow money from their parents.

句中“borrow money from ask for money from”结构重复且错误，应删除多余部分，保留正确表达“borrow money from their parents”。