金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构不完整，且有重复词汇。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，并使用连词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my best friend when I was in junior high school because I wanted to buy a camera that was too expensive for me. Therefore, I asked her for a loan and promised to pay her back as soon as possible.

建议: 回答内容混乱，句子不完整且含糊不清，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议练习构建完整句子，使用连接词，并提供具体细节以丰富回答。

示例: Yes, I have lent money to my best friend once because she wanted to buy a computer for gaming. She promised to pay me back as soon as possible.

× I really wanted to buy a camera, which were so expensive for me.

✓ I really wanted to buy a camera, which was so expensive for me.

这里的主语是单数名词“camera”，所以定语从句中的动词应该用单数形式“was”，而不是复数形式“were”。

× So I borrowed money from her and. Make make sure to pay her back as soon as I could this experienced.

✓ So I borrowed money from her and made sure to pay her back as soon as I could after this experience.

原句中断句不完整，且“Make make”重复且时态错误，应改为过去式“made sure”，并且“this experienced”应为“this experience”，使句子完整且语法正确。

× I remember the night island morning to my best friend was and she.

✓ I remember the night and morning with my best friend, and she

原句语序混乱且缺少必要成分，导致句子不通顺。应调整词序并补充缺失部分，使句子结构完整。

× She said that she will. Pay my bike as soon as possible.

✓ She said that she would pay me back as soon as possible.

在间接引语中，表示将来的“will”应改为过去式“would”，且“Pay my bike”表达错误，应为“pay me back”（还钱）。