金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如动词时态和单复数形式不正确，影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意动词时态的一致性，并使用更丰富的词汇来描述情感和情境，使回答更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money before. For example, once I borrowed $1000 from my boyfriend because my cat was very sick and I didn't have enough money to take him to the vet. I felt quite worried at that time, but thankfully my boyfriend was very understanding and helped me out.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“have no money to others”不符合英语习惯，且数字单位未明确。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并具体说明金额和情境，使回答更清晰自然。

示例: Yes, I have lent money to others before. For instance, once my friend didn't have enough money to pay for his lunch, so I lent him about $10 because he is a good friend and I wanted to help him. I felt happy to support him when he needed it.

× Yes, I have borrow money before.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money before.

这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词have后面应该接过去分词borrowed，而不是原形borrow。

× One time I borrow $1000 from my boyfriend because my cat was very sick, I didn't have enough money to take him to the vet.

✓ One time I borrowed $1000 from my boyfriend because my cat was very sick, and I didn't have enough money to take him to the vet.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式borrowed。同时两个句子之间应使用连词and连接，避免句子结构错误。

× I feel quite worry at that time but thankfully my boyfriend was very understanding and help me out.

✓ I felt quite worried at that time but thankfully my boyfriend was very understanding and helped me out.

描述过去的感受，应使用过去式felt和过去分词worried。动词help也应使用过去式helped。

× Yes, I have no money to others before.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others before.

这里想表达“我曾经借钱给别人”，应使用现在完成时have lent，lent是lend的过去分词。原句中have no money表达不正确。

× so I'll let him around 1000 because he is a good friend and I wanted to help him.

✓ so I lent him around 1000 because he was a good friend and I wanted to help him.

描述过去发生的事情，应使用过去式lent和was，而不是将来时'll let。

× I feel happy to support him when he needed it.

✓ I felt happy to support him when he needed it.

描述过去的感受，应使用过去式felt。