金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторов, таких как "I I". Используйте связующие слова для логичности, например, "because" или "so". Также старайтесь давать более конкретные детали, например, сколько денег вы занимали или как это повлияло на вас.

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money several times. The largest amount was when I needed to pay for a medical test because my leg was hurting. I had to undergo a computer tomography, which was quite expensive, so I borrowed money from a friend to cover the cost.

建议: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует строить предложения более чётко и логично. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы связать идеи. Также уточните детали, например, сколько денег вы одалживали и почему. Избегайте незавершённых предложений.

示例: Yes, I have lent money to others. Before we got married, my husband asked me for some money to pay for his studies. Another time, I lent him money to repair his car, which he repaid within five days after receiving his salary.

× I borrowed several times, but the biggest amount was when I needed money for my medical analysis.

✓ I borrowed money several times, but the biggest amount was when I needed money for my medical analysis.

The phrase 'borrowed several times' is incomplete because 'borrowed' is a transitive verb and requires an object. Adding 'money' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× For example, I I had to check my leg because it was hurting and I needed a lot of money for the computer tomography.

✓ For example, I had to check my leg because it was hurting and I needed a lot of money for the computer tomography.

The repetition of the pronoun 'I' is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate 'I' corrects the sentence.

× Oh yes I have, when my husband before we got married asked some money for his studies, so I'll let him.

✓ Oh yes, I have. When my husband, before we got married, asked for some money for his studies, I lent it to him.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and incorrect verb form 'I'll let him'. The corrected sentence clarifies the subject and uses the correct past tense verb 'lent' to indicate the action.

× For instance, the second time it was when he needed money for his car appear until his salary it took only 5 days. So.

✓ For instance, the second time was when he needed money for his car repair until his salary arrived; it took only 5 days.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'car appear'. The correction clarifies the meaning by replacing 'appear' with 'repair' and restructuring the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.