金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题并用简洁的句子说明原因，避免使用不恰当的词汇。

示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I prefer to manage my finances independently.

建议: 回答内容混乱，语法和表达错误严重，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用合理的理由支持观点，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: No, I have never lent money to others because I believe it can sometimes cause problems in relationships.

× No, I haven't. Because I think borrowed money from others is so bad behavior.

✓ No, I haven't because I think borrowing money from others is bad behavior.

句子中使用了两个独立的句子“Because I think borrowed money from others is so bad behavior.”，但第二句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构错误。应将其与前句合并，且“borrowed”应改为动名词“borrowing”，表示一般行为。

× Because I think borrowed money from others is so bad behavior.

✓ Because I think borrowing money from others is bad behavior.

“borrowed”是过去分词形式，句中应使用动名词形式“borrowing”来表示一般行为。

× No, I haven't ever lent money to others because my parents took me.

✓ No, I haven't ever lent money to others because my parents taught me not to.

句子中“my parents took me”不完整且无意义，缺少谓语和宾语，导致句子结构错误。应补充完整表达，如“taught me not to”。

× Lent money to others is not so good.

✓ Lending money to others is not so good.

句子缺少主语，且“Lent”应为动名词“Lending”作为主语使用。

× For us and I think there.

✓ For us, I think so.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清晰。应简化为“ For us, I think so.”。

× Lance found to others is so. Turbo heavy.

✓ Lending money to others is very burdensome.

句子中“Lance found to others is so. Turbo heavy.”完全不符合语法和表达习惯，应改为正确表达“Lending money to others is very burdensome.”。