金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，导致意思难以理解。建议回答时先明确主题句，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免语法错误和不连贯。

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before. For example, once I needed some money to buy candies, but my mother had already given me some money to buy a toy, so I had to borrow a little extra from a friend.

建议: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺乏具体细节。建议先用简单句直接回答问题，然后用连词连接原因或观点，表达要清楚且有逻辑。

示例: No, I have never lent money to others. Because my friends told me it can cause problems, so I am afraid to lend money to anyone.

× I want to buy some else weeds candies an but my mother had already bought a toy from me so.

✓ I wanted to buy some other sweets, but my mother had already bought a toy for me.

这里'some else weeds candies an'是错误的表达，应该用'some other sweets'来表示“其他糖果”。另外，'an'是多余的，且句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的名词和连词来表达完整意思。

× I want to buy some else weeds candies an but my mother had already bought a toy from me so.

✓ I wanted to buy some other sweets, but my mother had already bought a toy for me.

句子中描述的是过去的事情，动词时态应使用过去式，'want'应改为'wanted'。

× He didn't give me enough money.

✓ She didn't give me enough money.

根据上下文，'He'指代错误，应该是'mother'，即女性，故应使用'she'。

× No, I haven't lend money to others.

✓ No, I haven't lent money to others.

'lend'的过去分词是'lent'，在现在完成时中应使用过去分词形式。

× In fact that I think if I lend my money to others is the seam Aslund.

✓ In fact, I think if I lend my money to others, it is the same as losing it.

句子结构混乱，缺少必要的标点和连词，且单词拼写错误。应调整句子结构，使其表达清晰完整。

× Life to others and this is my friends told me that so I'm afraid of that.

✓ Lending to others, and this is what my friends told me, so I'm afraid of that.

'Life to others'应为'Lending to others'，且句子中缺少主语和谓语，导致表达不清。应调整为完整句子并修正词汇。

× Lend money to others.

✓ Lending money to others.

该短语缺少主语和谓语，作为句子不完整。应改为动名词形式作为句子的一部分。