金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: حاول تبقى إجابتك أوضح ومنظمة أكتر. استخدم جمل قصيرة وواضحة، وابتعد عن التكرار. مثلاً، ابدأ بجملة رئيسية مباشرة، وبعدين وضح السبب بشكل بسيط ومنظم.

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others because I needed to invest in a business. This investment helped me improve my life and become more successful.

建议: ركز على استخدام كلمات صحيحة وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية. حاول توضح فكرتك بشكل أفضل باستخدام جمل مترابطة ومنطقية مع ربط الأفكار بكلمات وصل.

示例: Yes, I like to lend money to others because it helps strengthen our community and makes people happy, especially those who are poor.

× I borrow money from from other because I I was needed to investment into investment that money and make my life more comfortable and I and make me more successful person.

✓ I borrowed money from others because I needed to invest that money and make my life more comfortable and become a more successful person.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'other' instead of 'others' and 'investment' used incorrectly as a noun instead of the verb 'invest'. Also, 'I I was needed' is incorrect; it should be 'I needed'. The verb tense should be past to match the question 'Have you ever borrowed'. Suggestions: use 'borrowed' for past tense, 'others' for plural, and 'invest' as the verb.

× Yes, I love to lend money from other because that can make our society more strong and make them feel happy and I love it, especially poor people.

✓ Yes, I love to lend money to others because that can make our society stronger and make them feel happy, and I love it, especially for poor people.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'other' instead of 'others'. Also, the preposition 'from' is incorrect here; it should be 'to' when lending money. 'More strong' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'stronger'. Suggestions: use 'to others' when lending, 'others' for plural, and 'stronger' as the comparative adjective.