金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid confusing phrases like "it's an inflammation area." Also, keep your answer concise and relevant, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I have rarely borrowed money from others. When I was a student, I didn't need to borrow money, but now, sometimes I borrow small amounts from friends when I am short of cash.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid filler words like "uh" and be specific about the situation. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I have lent money to others. For example, in 2019 during college, I lent 2000 rupees to a friend, but unfortunately, he did not pay me back. It was an awkward and difficult situation for me.

× When I was a child or when I was in my graduation, I didn't buy or borrow money from my friend.

✓ When I was a child or when I was in my graduation, I didn't borrow money from my friends.

The phrase 'borrow money from my friend' is correct, but 'buy money' is incorrect because you do not 'buy' money. Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to indicate borrowing from any friend, which is more natural. The preposition 'in' before 'my graduation' is incorrect; it should be 'during my graduation' or 'when I was graduating.' However, since 'graduation' is an event, 'when I was graduating' is better.

× But nowadays, like it's an inflammation area sometimes I borrow money from my friend whenever I need it.

✓ But nowadays, since it's an inflationary period, sometimes I borrow money from my friends whenever I need it.

The phrase 'like it's an inflammation area' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'inflation period' or 'inflationary period.' Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to indicate borrowing from any friend. The preposition 'like' is incorrectly used here; 'since' or 'because' is more appropriate to indicate reason.

× I really lent my money to the others, but I remember Waverly in my college time when I Washington in 2019, I learned uh ₹2000 to my friend, but he didn't return to me.

✓ I really lent my money to others, but I remember Waverly during my college time when I was in Washington in 2019, I lent ₹2000 to my friend, but he didn't return it to me.

The phrase 'the others' is incorrect; 'others' without 'the' is correct when referring to people in general. 'When I Washington' is missing the verb 'was in' to indicate location and time. 'Learned' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lent' for giving money temporarily. Also, 'didn't return to me' should be 'didn't return it to me' to include the object 'it' referring to the money.

× It was awkward and it was worst situation that time.

✓ It was awkward and it was the worst situation at that time.

The word 'worst' is a superlative adjective and requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, 'that time' should be 'at that time' to correctly indicate the time reference.