金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，且句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子补充细节。

示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I manage my finances carefully. I keep a budget to track my spending, which helps me avoid borrowing.

建议: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用具体原因和例子支持观点，使用连贯的句子。

示例: Actually, I rarely lend money to others because I prefer to avoid potential conflicts. For example, once I lent money to a friend, but they delayed paying me back, which made me uncomfortable.

× No, because I have money by myself and I always have a schedule to note when I spend money and how much money I spend so I ha have a.

✓ No, because I have money by myself and I always have a schedule to note when I spend money and how much money I spend.

句子中出现了“so I ha have a.”，这是多余且不完整的部分，属于句子结构错误。应删除多余部分，使句子完整通顺。

× Actually, I let let let to others very few, because I don't like that money to others.

✓ Actually, I lend to others very rarely, because I don't like to lend money to others.

“let let let”重复且用词错误，应使用“lend”表示借出；“very few”用法不当，应改为副词“very rarely”修饰动词；“don't like that money to others”结构不正确，应改为“don't like to lend money to others”。

× When I lend somebody money, they always don't borrow borrowing me too.

✓ When I lend somebody money, they never pay me back too.

“don't borrow borrowing me”结构错误，动词搭配不当，应改为“never pay me back”表示“从不还钱”；“too”位置不当，放在句尾更自然。