金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm a person with the habit of save time all the time”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I always manage my expenses carefully. For example, I only buy things that are necessary and avoid overspending, so I don't need to borrow money.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接原因，使表达更连贯。

示例: No, I have never lent money to others because once a friend asked me for a large amount, which I couldn't afford to lend, so I had to say no.

× My mom said that I was a I'm a person with the habit of save time all the time.

✓ My mom said that I am a person with the habit of saving time all the time.

句子结构混乱，出现了重复的“was a I'm a”，应简化为“am a”。此外，“habit of save time”中“save”应为动名词形式“saving”，表示习惯做某事。

× I was a I'm a person with the habit of save time all the time.

✓ I am a person with the habit of saving time all the time.

“habit of”后面应接动名词形式，表示习惯做某事，因此“save”应改为“saving”。

× I just buy, which I think is necessary, and I don't overpay anything so I don't need to borrow money from others.

✓ I just buy what I think is necessary, and I don't overpay for anything, so I don't need to borrow money from others.

“which I think is necessary”用法不当，应改为“what I think is necessary”表示“我认为必要的东西”。“overpay anything”缺少介词，应为“overpay for anything”。

× No, I never lend my money to others.

✓ No, I have never lent my money to others.

此处描述过去经历，应用现在完成时，动词“lend”的过去分词是“lent”，因此应使用“have never lent”。

× I remember the words my friend asked for help the the amount of the money is too big to lend, so I apologize I cannot.

✓ I remember when my friend asked for help, but the amount of money was too big to lend, so I apologized that I could not.

句子缺少连接词，且时态不一致。应加“when”引导时间状语从句，动词时态统一为过去时，“apologize”改为过去式“apologized”，并补充“that I could not”使句子完整。