金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法有误，如“borrowed money for others”应为“borrowed money from others”。内容较具体，但句子结构和连接词使用不足，导致表达不够连贯。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性。

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others a few times, usually from close friends or family members. For example, once I needed urgent financial help because of unexpected medical bills. Although I felt a bit uncomfortable asking for money, I was very thankful for their support.

建议: 回答中“have lend”应为“have lent”，注意动词时态和形式。内容具体且有逻辑，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。建议多使用连接词如“because”或“therefore”，并丰富细节。

示例: Yes, I have lent money to friends on a few occasions, especially when they were in urgent need. For instance, last year a close friend needed some cash to cover unexpected medical expenses, so I was happy to help because I value our friendship.

× Yes, I have lend money to friends on a few occasions, especially when they were in urgent need.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to friends on a few occasions, especially when they were in urgent need.

这里的动词“lend”应该使用过去分词形式“lent”，因为句子使用了现在完成时（have + 过去分词）。正确使用过去分词是构成完成时态的关键。建议记忆不规则动词的过去式和过去分词形式，避免类似错误。