金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达清晰且结构合理，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时增加具体细节来丰富内容。例如，可以说明你如何管理钱财或存钱的具体方法。

示例: No, I haven't borrowed money from others because I believe it can make me feel uncomfortable and indebted. Therefore, I always try to manage my money carefully by budgeting my daily expenses and saving a fixed amount each month in the bank for emergencies. This way, I can avoid borrowing and maintain financial independence.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误（'learned' 应为 'lent'），且内容表达不够清晰。建议注意动词时态和用词准确性，同时补充更多细节说明经历和感受，使回答更具体。

示例: No, I haven't lent money to others since I graduated from high school. At that time, I lent some money to my classmate Julia, but she forgot to return it, which made me feel very stressed and upset. Because of this experience, I now try to avoid lending money to others.

× No, I haven't lend money to others since I graduated from high school.

✓ No, I haven't lent money to others since I graduated from high school.

这里使用的是现在完成时态，助动词'haven't'后面应该接动词的过去分词形式。'lend'的过去分词是'lent'，所以应改为'haven't lent'。

× Back then, I learned some money to my classmate Julia, but she forgot to return it because of the experience.

✓ Back then, I lent some money to my classmate Julia, but she forgot to return it because of the experience.

句中表达借钱给别人，动词应使用'lend'的过去式'lent'，而不是'learned'（学习的过去式）。这里应改为'lent'表示过去借钱的动作。