金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using clearer and more natural English. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like "that type of people" and "take the help from mother." Instead, directly state your habit of not borrowing money and briefly explain why. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: I usually avoid borrowing money from others because I prefer to manage my finances independently. For example, I try to save enough before making any big purchases, so I don't have to rely on anyone else.

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid contradictory or confusing phrases like "I am very selfish person" and "for their juices." Instead, explain your reasons for not lending money politely and clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and keep your answer concise and relevant.

示例: I rarely lend money to others because I believe it's important to manage my own finances carefully. Moreover, I prefer to avoid any misunderstandings that might arise from lending money to friends or family.

× Well, to be honest I am that type of people who do not want to take the help from mother and that's why I do not borrow any money from anyone.

✓ Well, to be honest I am that type of person who does not want to take help from my mother and that's why I do not borrow any money from anyone.

The phrase 'type of people' is incorrect because 'type' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'person'. Also, 'do not want' should be 'does not want' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. The article 'the' before 'help' is unnecessary here, and 'from mother' should be 'from my mother' to specify possession.

× Well, to be honest I am that type of people who do not want to take the help from mother and that's why I do not borrow any money from anyone.

✓ Well, to be honest I am that type of person who does not want to take help from my mother and that's why I do not borrow any money from anyone.

The verb 'do' should be 'does' to agree with the singular subject 'person' in the relative clause 'who does not want'. This is a third person singular subject-verb agreement issue.

× Well, nowadays money is very important and that's why I do not want to lend our money to anyone because I am very selfish person and that's why I do not give want to give my money to another for their juices and apart from this I love money a lot.

✓ Well, nowadays money is very important and that's why I do not want to lend my money to anyone because I am a very selfish person and that's why I do not want to give my money to others for their juices and apart from this I love money a lot.

The phrase 'our money' is incorrect because the speaker is talking about their own money, so 'my money' is appropriate. Also, 'very selfish person' needs the article 'a' before it. The phrase 'do not give want to give' is incorrect and should be 'do not want to give'. 'Another' is incorrect here; 'others' is the correct plural pronoun to refer to other people.