金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议使用完整句子并避免重复和口语填充词。可以更清晰地表达借钱的原因和感受。

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others before because sometimes I need extra cash to buy things I like. However, I always make sure to pay it back on time, so it doesn't cause me much stress.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并明确说明借钱的原因，同时避免重复和口语填充词。

示例: Yes, I often lend money to my friends when they need it. For example, one of my friends sometimes borrows money to spend time with his girlfriend, and I understand his situation, so I am willing to help.

× Yeah, is a normal thing for me because I need money, do something I like, but I need to send it back.

✓ Yeah, it is a normal thing for me because I need money to do something I like, but I need to pay it back.

句子缺少主语“it”，导致结构不完整。需要添加主语并调整动词形式，使句子完整且符合语法。建议在“need money”和“do something”之间加上“to”表示目的。

× he have a girlfriend, he must to umm, he need money to uh, to play with her girlfriends and I understand it.

✓ he has a girlfriend, he must, umm, he needs money to, uh, spend time with his girlfriend and I understand it.

动词“have”应为第三人称单数形式“has”，动词“need”也应为“needs”。“must to”错误，助动词“must”后不加“to”。“play with her girlfriends”表达不当，应为“spend time with his girlfriend”。