金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“brought”应为“borrowed”，“I not have”应为“I did not have”。建议注意动词时态和否定形式的正确使用。此外，回答中缺少连贯的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”或“so”来使句子更自然。

示例: Yes, I borrowed money from my brother three years ago because I did not have enough money to go out for meals with my girlfriend at that time.

建议: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“learned”应为“lent”，“general friend”应为“good friend”或“friend”。句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并简洁明了地表达观点，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I lent money to a good friend named Alvin three years ago, but he never paid me back, which made me feel very frustrated.

× Yes, I brought money from my brother three years ago.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from my brother three years ago.

这里使用了错误的动词“brought”，正确的动词应该是“borrowed”，表示“借钱”。“brought”是“bring”的过去式，意思是“带来”，与句意不符。

× I not have enough money so I had to ask my brother for help.

✓ I did not have enough money so I had to ask my brother for help.

句子中缺少助动词“did”来构成否定句，正确形式是“did not have”。直接使用“not have”是不正确的。

× Yes, I learned money from one of my general friend, Alvin alerted for three years, but he never paid back.

✓ Yes, I lent money to one of my general friends, Alvin, for three years, but he never paid me back.

“learned money”是错误的表达，正确动词是“lent”，表示“借出”。“general friend”应为复数“general friends”。“alerted”用法错误，应去掉。句子中缺少介词“to”表示借给某人。最后“paid back”前应加宾语“me”。