金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了清晰的观点，但句子结构稍显简单，且缺少适当的连接词使内容更连贯。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性，同时丰富词汇表达。

示例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because my mother always gave me some extra money to avoid emergencies, so I didn't need to ask anyone for help.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“learned money”应为“lent money”，且句子结构混乱。建议注意动词时态和词汇准确性，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I lent money to others when I was young, but as I got older, I try to avoid doing that because last time, the people who borrowed money from me didn't pay me back.

× I have learned money to others when I was young but when I get older I try to avoid the things happening again because last time the people borrowing money from me didn't back to me.

✓ I lent money to others when I was young but when I got older I tried to avoid these things happening again because last time the people borrowing money from me didn't pay me back.

句中“have learned”用法错误，应使用过去式“lent”表示过去发生的动作；“get”应改为过去式“got”，保持时态一致；“try”应改为过去式“tried”；“the things”改为“these things”更符合语境；“didn't back to me”表达不正确，应改为“didn't pay me back”。这些错误主要是时态使用不当和固定搭配错误。建议学习动词的过去式形式及常用短语搭配。