金钱— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 시제 일관성을 유지해야 합니다. 또한, 불필요한 반복을 줄이고, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 논리적 흐름을 개선하세요.

示例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my mom when I was a child because I wanted to buy something expensive that I couldn't afford. She kindly lent me the money, and I was able to get it.

建议: 답변에 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장 간의 논리적 관계를 분명히 하세요. 또한, 구체적인 상황 설명을 추가하면 더 좋습니다.

示例: Yes, I have lent money to others before. For example, recently one of my closest friends needed some money to buy something important, so I decided to help her. Although I know lending money can sometimes cause problems, I trusted her because we are very close.

× Yes I did. When I was kid I was borrowed money from my mom because that time I was wanted to get something but I couldn't buy because it's very expensive.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I borrowed money from my mom because at that time I wanted to get something but I couldn't buy it because it was very expensive.

'I was borrowed' is incorrect because 'borrowed' is a past tense verb and should not be used with 'was' here. The correct form is 'I borrowed'. Also, 'I was wanted' should be 'I wanted' as 'want' is a stative verb and does not use 'was'. Additionally, 'When I was kid' needs an article 'a' before 'kid'. 'It's very expensive' should be 'it was very expensive' to match past tense context.

× So I borrow my mom money and I got it.

✓ So I borrowed money from my mom and I got it.

'I borrow' should be in past tense 'I borrowed' to match the past context. Also, 'my mom money' is incorrect; it should be 'money from my mom' to correctly indicate possession and object.

× Yes, I have lent money to other before.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others before.

'Other' is incorrect here; the plural form 'others' is needed to refer to multiple people. Also, 'have lent' is correct present perfect tense for this context.

× For example recently most close friends needed to some money to buy something important, so I decide to help her.

✓ For example, recently most of my close friends needed some money to buy something important, so I decided to help her.

'Needed to some money' is incorrect; it should be 'needed some money' without 'to'. Also, 'most close friends' should be 'most of my close friends' to specify possession. 'I decide' should be past tense 'I decided' to match the past context.

× Although I know lending money can something cause problem, but she's very close.

✓ Although I know lending money can sometimes cause problems, she is very close to me.

The phrase 'can something cause problem' is incorrect; it should be 'can sometimes cause problems'. Also, 'but' is unnecessary after 'although' as both are conjunctions; use one. 'She's very close' is incomplete; it should specify 'she is very close to me' for clarity.